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February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, first of all, I'm so glad to be reading a well written piece of fiction. Secondly, I'm very happy it's got some twisted smut! Love older!Snape taking delicious advantage of young!Harry in all sorts of deviant ways. Especially when he tells Harry it's for his own good! I really hope you plan to continue this, as I think it has wonderful potential. I'm definitely looking forward to more!
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February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story. I can't wait to see where you go with this story. The Severus that you have created is interesting. The fact that he is taking over peoples thoughts and actions by a potion is great. New idea and I find it intriguing. Good luck.
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February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good grief. what did he learn that sent snape over the edge like that enough to get over the whole james jr thing and enough to want to turn har into his own sex toy. immoral much. so if he's isn't going to allow them to search for the horcruxes, how are they going to give voldi the boot.
will you be continuing?
will you be continuing?
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February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I loooovvveee stories like this! Wonderful wonderful and excellent writing, can't wait to see where you go with this!
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February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
somehow snapes 'care' seems entirely selfishly motivated. does he really care for har or does he just want to train a f ck toy and if har ever finds out he's going to be very hurt. will he leave har any of his personality left if he only gives him the options of obedience or pain?
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February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interest is peaked, look forward to the next chapter.