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by SaitouLover

schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you plan to continue this story, as I am utterly hooked :) I enjoy the way that you portray Snape as both harsh and caring. I get a bit tired of stories where he's always awful or so out of character that he's a sappy mess. You've also hit upon two of my favourite kinks ;) So I hope to read more from you in the future.
schedule February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'll start off by saying this seems a well thought out story, as near as I can tell from just one chapter. I haven't decided yet what to think of Snape. He seems to have Harry's well being in mind, although he has a very deviant way of showing it. I'm not normally one to complain or anything, I will say this, though. You may want to consider adding a skat warning to the story. The enema scene can be quite a bit squicky to people and I would hate for someone to blast you for not warning in advance, especially as it seems things of that nature will continue in further chapters. I'll admit that its one of my squicks, I don't have many ;), but skat is one of them. They're not, er, playing with it, so I should be ok, but I'm just thinking I wish the warning were there.
schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!!! I love your story so far. PLEASE continue this. I love the whole enema thing and having the plug left in him... ahhhh there aren't that many stories like this, and there my favorites.
person hamie
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read the next chapter
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am Hooked....and anyone who is hooked on a good story...well needless to say I want more. This is brilliant and I can't wait for more and please keep it going please
person Pennfold
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm rather interested to see where this story goes.
person Tesgura
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, aside from the obvious question of why no more hocrux hunting, why didn't Snape just feed Harry the same potion he fed everyone else? Or perhaps he simply wants to break Harry the old fashioned way. Either way, this looks highly entertaining and I certainly hope you'll be continuing this story soon.
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's good to know that Snape is going to take good care of Harry. You should continue this fic and make it into a series. I would love to know what else would happen for Harry and Snape as they begin a relationship and get closer.
person tkykitty
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG Please Please tell me there are more chapters to come!!!! This is an Amazing story line. Best I've read in awhile. I do hope more chapters are coming soon !!!!!! :-)
person Japhia
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My God, please update this soon! What wonderful writing skills.