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Interesting. That control potion that snape has people drugged with.... I do hope that Harry isn't one with it in his system. At least Harry isn't completely stupid enough to believe the crap snape was telling him about having some kind of problem with his bowel functions. I look forward to the next update!

Great story though Snapes character leaves me a bit conflicted. He seems caring but he is also a pervert who just wants Harry for himself. I am curiouse how Harry will react to the idea of ever having sex with Snape. :D

Snape knock up Ganger? how?

AAAAnd I'm still torn, lol. On one hand, what Snape is doing is so very wrong. Its a very twisted way of showing compassion and caring for someone. He's preying on Harry's weaknesses; the fact that he's never had someone to care for him, that he's very ignorant about the way of things (the whole closing rectum thing. Pince must be under Snape's potion, too). On the other hand, he is caring for Harry, when no one else bothered to. He's taking him in hand and putting a stop to the destructive behavior that Dumbledore was allowing. He's teaching him to ask for help when needed, to let someone take care of him. Yet he's also taking extreme advantage, and using humiliation tactics. I will definitely have to keep reading to see where you go with this. I forgot to mention before, also, how intriguing it is that Snape HAS CONTROL OF VOLDEMORT! I really can't wait to see where that goes!


I'm so glad you appreciated my warning. I debated on saying anything, because I've seen where other authors take advice like that completely wrong and blast the reviewer in review replies in the nexxt chapter. Your welcome, and thank you for taking that as the friendy advice that it was intended as. This is really well written, with clever descriptions, allowing your readers to really 'see' each scene. I'll keep reading. -_^

looooveeee!!!

Oh!!!! Controlling, powerfull, smarter than everyone Snape with total mindcontroll through a potion! Thats just totally brilliant! Thank you!
Add to that your darkish bdsm startup with harry (who defenetly is in need of Snapes care) and you got me bouncing up and down in anticipation of your next chapter!!!
Please update soon! This story is great and Im dying to see what you come up with next!

Sounds like Snape really cares for Harry. That's sweet. I hope you update again soon please.

I don't usually read Harry/Snape stories, but your's caught my eye. I like how in the beginning you've established how even though this seems to be a DOM/sub BDSM relationship it is still about caring! Despite the fact that Harry seems some what reluctant (for now hehe) I am really looking forward to seeing what you're going to do with this story. Please update soon!

Interesting story; not really my thing, but I do appreciate the creativity and respect the interest of others. I do enjoy seeing a softer Snape, guess I like it when hard asses show a soft side. I'll continue to read and give advice when I feel its required.

I'm a bit confused. does har really have an arse problem or is snape merely doing this to condition har to his touch and prepare his insides for invasion later?
I'm glad mio isn't deliberately betraying har to save her own hide. That i would've had a problem with.
i'm glad har has the room just for the night atm. otherwise snape would have been sending mixed messages with saying that har doesn't get special treatment but giving him his own room.
I'm curios though, it's a given snapes not going to give his pet up to die with voldi so how are they going to get rid of snake face? cause for har to truly be safe, red eyes needs to go and that includes his horcruxs... which snape is in no way, size, shape or form going to let har go look for.
also, isn't this new care of har making things dangerous for snape as well, considering his spy vs roll. Are we sticking with canon up to this point or is a bit AU entering the mix?