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I love this are you posting anywhere else? I don't like to long in an review to this site because i hate filling in the stop spam thing you have to do every-time you review, so i usually don't but i like this so much so i'll do it this time.

Awesome

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Amazing, Amazing, Amazing new chapters. I love how you write your story. Poor Harry, sometimes it seems that he is giving in and then the next he is his old self. Love, love, love it. Snape is a great character too, much like jk's but with your own flare. Can

Again, so torn, lol. I'm trying to remember...the whole closing of the colon thing was actually made up, right? I think you said Snape lied or something....then used that potion to convince Hermione of the truth. It's just...he's caring for Harry so well on one front, then abusing him on another with the anal plug and penis cap and all....so torn. When Snape says, "Because no one else will." God, so said that it's true.

Interesting; so Sevy's not just doing this for his own enjoyment hmm, but actually helping Harry...I see.
I've learned my lesson, do not eat when reading a story like this, no matter how 'cast iron' you may think your stomach is. My sub will have to wait until tomorrow. *ahem* Again, not exactly my thing, but as I've said before, I'll read it because I have an open mind of some things and this is still tactfully done. Continue along this thread, don't allow yourself to become distasteful in how you present your story. You're doing well thus far, so bravo!

Leania

Words cannot express. :D
I love the story so far! I can't wait to see
what happens next!

I love the story but wish you would use a larger font.

interesting, so that one fact was enough to trigger this... i can't remember when the occlumency 'lessons' happened so i don;t remember if snape has seen his memories at all. Why would he want to make sure har has a soft cock btw? i wouldn;t have thought he;d care that much if har got embarrassed but then i suppose he;s still building a rapport with har, so it behooves him to gain his trust and embarrassing him would work against that. why make it so he can't go to the toilet at all though?

I dunno, har seems pretty naive so far... though you're probably right about the stretching thing.

is voldi still about... if so, snape is going to have to let his precious fight... unless dumbles concocted that prophesy from the air. Even if he's under snape control, i can;t see him being content to let it remain that way. after all, riddle was a genius... completely nutters now of course but he was a genius.

no ones gonna dis or challenge har for not being in gryffindor tower any more?
Is snape going to wait till har;s legal to take him? Har would be what, fourteen, fifteen? unfortunately, i doubt snape can liquid imperious everyone so he has to keep it legal ish for now.

Aw that is a cute update. I love how Severus is being a Seme to Harry, and how he cares for him. It's obvious. Love it. I hope more is to come soon please.