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Oh my goodness, that fruit and chocolate drink sounded devine. And Harry in Severus' lap, sucking it off his fingers, sinfully erotic. It's good to see Harry becoming more accepting of these feelings. I'm feeling better and better about this thing between them.

yay!

I am loving this story, and check every day to see if you've updated it. In my mind, Harry looks like the younger, sweeter version from Goblet of Fire, with the longer hair and sweet face. Here Snape is very appealing - dangerous, so competent, so very in control but also very concerned with Harry's welfare. I can't wait to see where the story is going!

This story is pretty awful. The idea that we, the readers, are meant to buy into the concept that the gryffindors are the hot heads for wanting to confront a classmate who spouts blatantly racist slurs is insane and unsupported by the rest of the story. I guess if you read the story with the assumption that morality is opposite in this AU then it makes some sense (ie snape is really caring for harry, rather than just sexually abusing him and trying to gain control over all aspects of his life to further the end goal; it's Hermione and Ron's faults for riling up Draco and forcing this otherwise good kid to call her the HP equivalent of a n**ger.) Here's the thing, I'm a big Nabokov fan so I understand the goal of trying to create complicity between the reader and the imoral or amoral protagonist, but this story does not do that well.

Cool chapter :)

yay! a new chapter. what is the significance of the bracelet? the shopkeepers keep noticing it, it must mean something more that just portkeys, spells, etc.

hope more is tocome soon. That bit was hawt

I really enjoyed this chapter!! The interaction between Snape & Harry was really good. Looking forward to reading more, thanks for your hard work!!

i am so interested in this fic.will u continue it.what will happen next.

FAN!~