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Oh, wow! What an interesting turn of events! Did you have this all planned from the beginning, or is it coming to you as you write? The history of Magic part was really thought out and fascinating. I really love the idea of Severus as one of these Stewards, and in fact Magic's "Head" as it seems. The explanation as to why Dumbledore is so against the Old Ways makes so much sense. You've done a good job of using something from canon to support your AU story. I really am enjoying where this is going! I'm anxious though for Harry. He's left in a rather difficult spot if Severus is incapacitated, as he can't remove certain, ah, things by himself. I will be looking forward to your next update!

Great chapter, it's become a bit deep.

Wow! That was a right turn up and over a loop de loop! This is really going places I never thought it would.

Enjoying.

Little nitpick. You bear children, bare is naked. lol

FAN!~

Thank God I didn't stop reading this after the scare with the first chapter...(although smut is always ok, I'm no fan of scat)
The plot is growing stronger and stronger and I keep waiting anxiously for your updates.
(Sorry for any mistakes... english is not my first language)

I LOVE this story!! Is there anyway you can let me know when you update??

For me to say I love this story, doesn't even come close. I absolutely adore it to the highest level. The way you have kept Harry and Snape in character throughout the whole plot is absolutely stunning to me, I really hope you continue this story, and finish it, I cannot wait. The style of writing is beautifully crafted, Snape's lust for harry is balanced well with his care for the boy. Such as when Harry was near passed out in the shop, I cannot wait to see how their relationship progresses, and where it goes for them. Snape's Master is such an amazing woman, I could literally picture how amazing she is. I hope you bring forth Harry's anger at one point, I would love to see how Snape handles that, after all every kid gets pissed once in awhile.You are an amazing writer, and I hope you don't stop this story, or lose your characters core, I really get annoyed when authors start going haywire. So far you have stayed on track, and I can't wait to read more!!
-ShirShir
Email: scott.229@wright.edu

I really love your story, I can't wait to see how you take it in future chapters and sometimes left thinking how it would end in the epilogue. But please don't let that one review to put you or your story down. If she/he don't like it, or have a problem with it and how the story is, then they shouldn't have read and review 'Care.'
And what would he/she knows about the rest of us, if we would like a story or not?!
I have had read great stories over the years, and sometimes there would be a review putting the story, and the author down, and the next minute, the story is gone and the writer had given up just because of one hurtful little review. Don't let one person put you down!!!
I love 'Care' since I first came across it!
So please keep on writing for 'Care', I can't wait for more!

Really loving this more every update. The ease with which you go from tidbits of wizzarding culture, history, etc. to hot and steamy porn (lol) and back again is wonderful.

Thanks for the chapter. : )I love the interaction between Harry and Severus in the restaurant. I hope you put more of that in later chapters. :D Looking forward to the next update.