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Oh, my goodness, that accent was a shock! LOL. I love it. It endears Severus to us even more. It will be interesting to see how he reacts to Harry when he wakes up, now that he's seen him so week and speaking so common. I love Flitwick as well! He seems so forgotten in other stories. Hm. I think I will need to do some rereading though, when I have time. Things are mentioned that I have forgotten.

Er, also, I only mention it because you asked for plot inconsistencies, and this might be one? I'm not sure (really need to reread) but didn't Snape put certain things on Harry that would make using the bathroom impossible? And a person can't go over a day without peeing....maybe I misunderstood that part, but I thought I'd mention it just in case. Ignore me if I'm wrong :).

A good story, even if i have sometimes trouble following ^^

two things
even if it was hilarious, can you make it that snape speaks normal again ( i am not able to read what he says)

and secnd. can you please consider Dumbeldore in a better light? I know he is good for the evil part, but... it was always a point i liked that Harmry and Dumbeldore remain

I really like this story and I might have found the story you was looking for its called Scarred Souls by MistyMoonlight. I hope that this will help you out. Also I like where you are going with this story but I hope you put in some of the things that where in the first chapter.

Great Chapter! Lots of good info. And snape was so funny

Great chapter, is it wrong that I kinda liked Snape with his regional accent?

Loved the insights into Lily, James and Sirius. I always thought Liy was a bit similar to Hermione and being a bit controlling is definitely a characteristic shared between them. I'm glad Flitwick had a chat about the behaviour of Harry's father too. He was a prat mainly in an attempt to get Lily and get her away from Snape while Sirius was just a git really. Can imagine Pettigrew just follwing along with whatever they did and though I do think Lupin was more morally sound than his friends, he was probably a bit cowed by them too. Let's face it, if my friends knew a massive secret of mine that could get me expelled and ostracised, I'd try not to cross them much either.

Loed your Flitwick in this and his patience with Harry. I wonder how his talk with McGonagall wil go.

Good luck with your fic search, I'll keep an eye out as well :)

Hi, I've went trough all my favourites and even several fic lists, like suicide, HP/SS with canon children, etc. Nothing came up, I am so sorry, but it seems it was deleted. I am 80% sure it was on hpfandom... but there is nothhing not even in searchs. I will go trough my archived history of tabs, thats four years of tabs with fanfics, maybe I will find something there. I have broke my arm few days ago, so I have lots of time to search.
There is list of lists, maybe someone have better eyes than me: http://partial-eclipse.net/lists/bytheme.html

I love this story so much. Overtired Severus is hilarious!

Must have more detail, more learning the Old ways, more story!?

I love this story it is getting successively better. I can't wait to see where this is going as I love the ideas and I am finding the story to be filled with fresh ideas.

FAN!~

It sounds good if you find it please let me know I'd like to read that