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person SoulMore
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
FAN!~
person Evil minion
schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for posting! I just wanted to say that I really love the direction this story is taking. It's really very cool! I'm just a bit afraid when you say that you don't have a clear project. Do you think you are going to finish this story? It's always horrible when a story I love gets abandoned, so I usually don't read stories that aren't finished yet. Could you tell me if you have any idea what you are going to do? Thanks anyway, really looking forward to the next update! :)
person GuestAnon
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What is your inspiration for this story? What made you think up the plot and point and what have you? How long have you been building this story? I would really like to know.
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story! PLEASE try to update soon.
person djaddict
schedule December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was so glad to see an update on this!

While I admit you through me for a loop with all this lovely plot, in a story that I thought would be mostly pwp, I am quite intrigued to see where it goes next.

Enjoying!
person Emma
schedule December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So glad your back writing, hope everything is ok now and stays that way :) your a great writer
person Emma
schedule December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oops sorry but one thing bugs me, people who learn to change there accent (most commonly to a rp accent). Don't revert, in fact they can find it very hard to use there 'old' accent, and many people regret it, feeling like they have lost a part of they're identity, the likelihood is they would only revert if they had very severe retrograde amnesia, no longer able to remember changing their accent. (Sorry did a degree on english and psychology). But that is me being really really nit picking, and in a story that needs us to accept magic as a reality I probably shouldn't be picking up on someone's accent being unrealistic.
schedule December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must say this is a FANTASTIC story. Very well written, very well thought out, and I really like where you're going with it so far. I'm curious to see what is going to happen with the Old Ways and magic. I really look forward to your next update!
schedule December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned before how much I love Severus' cockney? (lol hopefully I spelled that right. It looks weird....)

I really liked this chapter. I'm glad McGonagall is going to start being a better head of house. Honestly, if she'd been paying better attention, I like to think she'd have caught on to what Harry was going through with his relatives. Harry needed that confrontation with her as well. I am a bit worried about him going back to his dorm. That last sentence almost seemed like foreshadowing.
person Moon Whistler
schedule December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for giving us all another lovely chapter! And have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year for this Xmas. I can't wait to see what happens next! I'll be waiting and hoping to see another new chapter soon :) Thank you!