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Fuck, that was hot. Can't wait for more!

Awesome story. I want to hear more!!! I just love dominant Snape. Two word corrections however.... the first is the word "wonton" I do realize that is a Chinese appetizer but I'm pretty sure you weren't referring to that; in which case it's actually spelled "WANTON".(Ex. She was a wanton whore), unless in fact you did mean to imply she is willing to whore it out for Chinese Wontons....I wouldn't blame you....that sh*t is good. The second spelling misuse is "sack". It is indeed a sack when you are carrying around a bag or purse of something, most likely burlap, however when referring to a man's balls it is spelled "sac".... unless of course you meant he hid his money in a sack attached to his penis because he was in fact travelling in a rough neighborhood. Again I wouldn't blame you, it's a great place to hide valuables. Wish I thought of it first. Soooo that's all you have a great story. Feel free to pick on my commas and crap. I can spell but I never did get comma usage. Eh well.

I am in an M/s relationship (we started as D/s) and i love how you portray those elements. could we possible see hermione having to wear nipple clamps later on (under her clothes during classes).

It's getting better as time goes on.

Oh the reveal! As broken and as tragic as I'd hoped. His rage was priceless! Her sobs and the choking- practically divine. And the punishment, oh gods the punishment. It's a wonder she didn't earn herself another one by finishing herself there in the library. So freakin' hot. And I got so close to finishing the next chapter in mine today- but then I saw this and got distracted! :-p Great job! Please oh please let her get off.

~CC

Combining some chapters is a good thought. I am glad Sec knows now but does he know she almost lost her life trying to save his? Wonder how he would feel about that? Well great update as always. HOpe more is to come soon please.

I like that this story isn't just a straight up Hermione gets punished in detention story and that she saved Severus's life. Not to mention it's not just lust on her part and soon to be his, what with his obsession with the woman who saved him. Hermione has good friends, but I'd be a little miffed that none of them can keep her secrets! Draco outing her tendencies, to Marcus no less. Harry breaking her confidence. I wouldn't be so quick to confide in them in the future. I'm glad she has Draco and she's better off with his reassurances, but he needs to learn when to not laugh at her! I guess he can only become so sensitive. I hope Snape treads carefully with her. She is an orphan after all. ;-)

OH delicious. The spanking was terribly hot. And oh yes, I do suppose she will have to come back now. But why- oh why did we not get the cutaway scene to him in his rooms, desperately tugging at his raging erection to bring himself to release with the images of her swollen bottom on his mind??? Poor Severus, raging hard and nothing to help him. Can't wait for the next one!

~CC

I adore this story and I cannot wait to read more. =)

Uhoh :)