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for Pleasure War

by shsa0702

person Persy
schedule July 17, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Oh!!!! How very, very hot and steamy!!!!!

schedule February 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Love this!!! Love the wet dream and the invisibility cloak parts :D you totally brought alive the smexyyy Snape!!! Wish there are more content like this *wink wink*

person Alyssa
schedule December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story was hilarious, cute, and a huge turn on! Had so many wonderful elements!
person guiltypleasure2
schedule December 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was so thrilled that you finally had the time to update.

You did not disappoint, this was so much fun to read. Yay a happy and content Severus.
person Fox
schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong of me to want this competition to continue for a long while?

This story is brilliant.
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh damn, I'm a sucker for a good fingering in a fic, and now I'm all hot and bothered, damn you!!!! lol
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS DIRTYYYYYYYYY!!! Hell even I got so into it, I forgot they were in the middle of a meeting hahaha!!! My mouth is hanging open right now
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
more pleeeeease!
schedule October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"I hope you take it's late appearance as a positive and enjoy the quick update ;)"

Oh I most certainly did, I was thrilled to see it was up and eager to read it.

Oh you did not disappoint, it was just great. Especially the last line " All is fair in love and War" BAM!
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a "fun" story with some truly inspiring ideas. Loving it! HG4eva