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for Here But For the Grace of Merlin

by makochan0217

schedule May 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you're in trouble now Harry lol

that chapter was so fun to read, I loved how Hermione was there and Harry knew immediately that Ron had done something stupid to upset her which shows how close they are... and how Draco just slid naturally right in to the conversation but was totally confused by the good witch comment... and how Hermione told Draco that he was so not leaving the room till she got some answers... really fun to read lol
schedule May 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh the boys are in trouble now!!! Soooo need more!
schedule May 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story!! Please update soon! ;)
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nothing like an angry, volatile harry and draco playing the heroic prince to the rescue lol good ole cissa, can't wait to see what happens next :D
person Jien
schedule April 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for and update for this story. very nicely written :)
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol oh I just love Draco's mother... this story has such great pacing and each chapter moves the story along really well... great writing!!!
person Leania07
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a good one, and no I couldn't figure that one out. Who knew the press were good for something, eh? I loved Draco's epiphany, that 'Mother what have you done...' part, LOVED IT! You could almost see the cold sweat running down his back. Hmm, is Cissa going to mention that Harry can't be left home alone and scheme to somehow get him into the Manor? Or perhaps under the pretense of having Draco and Harry work together to deal with this magical backlash? She's a crafty woman, highly intelligent, and the least expected. As its been said numerous times (and yet no one listens), never trust a beautiful woman. Keep up the good work, look forward to the next!

Leania
person Carousel
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. It's clever and I can feel the tension increasing. Ooh la la~ I can't wait for more. I also love the way you present Narcissa Malfoy. This is exactly how I imagine her, calculating and elegant.
person Leania07
schedule April 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! Is Draco starting to figure out Cissa's plans? Or guessing what she may have planned. Hmm, Bill may be the only Curse Breaker willing to help, is their disdain really that bad that they'd refuse the only person who might be willing? Oh and a Cissa well rested has a much sharper mind; wonder what scheme's she comes up with.

Leania
schedule April 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh Narcissa... planning is good... very very good. Now how does she plan on getting Potter under her roof? I'm guessing by telling him he won't have to bother with well meaning friends but he will still be able to follow 'doctors orders'? :)