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for Here But For the Grace of Merlin

by makochan0217

person RayRay5790
schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
omg I love this story and cant wait for more chapters. Its a very creative piece of writing.
person lawaddler
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Love this story! Draco is the bottom right!? Pretty sure he is (can't picture him as a top and just the thought is funny) Omg they are perfect for each other! I hope Lucius can get better soon. A talk with Dumbledore would be good for Harry (have Dumbledore visit him in a dream) because Harry needs to get some confidence and just kiss Draco already! Some crazy Ginny jealousy (psycho) behavior would be nice to add into the drama. Over all I love what you have done so far and cannot wait to see more of your work!
schedule January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ooo I am really liking this story! I can hardly wait for more.
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Seems I missed reviewing a chapter last time, so good work on that one.

For this one, I totally love when Harry lets his magic out to play. :D

Great chapter and I hope home life is better soon for you x
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i haven't harassed you have i? i hope not. whiny, naggy readers are a pet peeve of mine, along with crappy spelling/grammar, wall o text and misused words. worse yet, they can even put writers off up dating to spite them which is opposite to what they're after. seriously, who are we to demand a damn thing?! it's not like you're getting paid for this. It's great that they love your story and all but seriously people, kindly shut the hell up. thank you, before you piss the author off to the point that they go and post elsewhere.
Ahhhhh, that feels better. Rant Complete. ^^

oh, arking up all over the place. volatile aren't they. good thing Cissa is getting good at fielding those.

i think i agree with your friend though, to soon and it would have undermined it some how, robbing it of its force.

good grief, ickle ronnikins is completely out of control... i mean, har wasn't exactly the epitome there either, but at least he's not attacking ppls property and carrying on like a complete nutter. i'm not looking forward to what mio has to say, it's probably going to be extremely painful for her.
schedule January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope your mom gets better and that real life isn't driving you crazy... or at least not too crazy because life tends to do that.

Great chapter! I always do like watching a powerful Harry and Ron needs to stop letting that temper of his rule everything... though I don't see him figuring that out.
schedule January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry is quite pissed. Good job Ron at making Harry an enemey towards yourself. Plus, you just made whatever little doubt Harry had left vanish. Congrates!
person Diana
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person delia cerrano
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've been dying for someone to tell Ron off forever! Can't wait to see what Mione has to say to Ron.
person Saurora9
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Love it!