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for Phases of the Night

by 6phoenix6flame6

schedule February 29, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Hello, I wanted to send this review and express my wonder at your story.   I am not a fan of crossovers as a lot of them are about alot of stories I am just not interested in seeing or reading.   However I am totally in love with this story.  I can not wait for you to update.  I know you have plans for Draco and the boys and I saddened by the deaths of his parents so give him a happy ending.  I can't wait to see what happens to the deranged, slim sucking, no balls, off his f$%king rocker Dumbledore.   Great job keep going. 

schedule August 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I truly hope there will be more soon. This is a wonderful story!

schedule August 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Itsbeen awhile since you last updated i am dieing to know what happens next 

Please update 323

person Quetzal
schedule July 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hey,

So I really like your story, it's adventurous and heartbreaking, but with lots of wonder, comedy and fluff thrown in as well. There are some moments where I tought it was a little cliche (like finding all of the weasley brothers- minus Ron-  fucking at the same time) but that just meshes with the comedy. And bringing all of our heroes back to life is great and all, though it seems cruel that your only bringing back all of Harry's people, what about poor Draco?

Anyways, I just wanted to give my opinion and tell you that it would alot of your reader very happy if you continued with the story even if its just another three chapters to finihs everything because you don't feel like going through writing another serie. Or you could  put it up for adoption? it could be a solution.

 

 

person cryort
schedule June 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story. please write more soon.
schedule May 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very impressive, very sexy. Can't wait for more.
person BAFan
schedule March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 8 So in this story Bella is a petulant little brat? I guess that means she isn't Edward's Singer, right? Very interesting premise you have going, though I suggest getting a beta; there are numerous typos and other errors. ~Debbie
person BAFan
schedule March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9 Exciting battle sequence! I'm curious to find out how Viktor Krum ended up there. You asked for corrections, so here goes: //Charlie guided Norbert down to the ground in the court yard of the dark foreboding castle. The castle was smaller then Hogwarts but no less breathtaking in its own creepy way.//. - Smaller THAN Hogwarts. // "That's our que to leave.. . .// - Should be "cue." //The scent of chard flesh made Charlie gagged.// - Should be "The scent of charred flesh made Charlie gag." Okay, there are others but I'll stop here. ~Debbie
person BAFan
schedule March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10 *blush* I hadn't picked up that they were at Durmstrang. Not very intelligent of me. ~Debbie
schedule March 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I didn’t think i was going to like this oneI'm glad I was wrong Please let me know when you update Morningstorm70@yahoo.com