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Nice of Neville to stand up for Harry. Ron has always been a jealous prat

Weather or not you put the feast in this chapter, you might want to put an A/N: that you added to the last chapter, even if it was the bit about the head-boy and girl thing. I'd suggest just uploading the feast as a separate chapter though personally so that people will know that you updated and not just edited the last chapter. I only just happened to notice the A/N at the bottom of the last chapter because I tend to re-read the last chapter before reading the new one in any story I'm reading.

Anyway, great story so far, still looking forward to more!

depending on how you're setting up what happens after the feast, i'd say save it and add it to the next chatper, or just do a short in-between chapter. and good for harry sticking up for himself, adn good on nev for sticking up for him too and punching ron. can just see little harry tucked against nev's chest all protective like lol. a few spelling errors throughout you may want to go back and check, but over all another great chapter. keep up the good work :)

I love the story so far. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.

Hm, this looks interesting. I can't wait to see more. There's nowhere near enough H/N, and this looks really good, esp since it's looking like it'll be Nev in charge. Looking forward to more!

interesting start to things, i look forward to seeing what's going on with all of harry's (former?)friends. oh, one small thing, the name of the paper is The Daily Prophet, not The Prophecy. keep up the good work :)

plz write more

so nev's all grown up now and harry's appreciating the differences lol. and sounds like things are even more suspicious than harry first thought according nev's news. keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next :)