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by Lomonaaeren

schedule March 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so, hang on, let me get this straight. draco was trying to make sure har was at least as obsessive about him as he was about har? Well, if nothing else, he sure knows how to play his hero boy.
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What can I say, except that I loved the last few chapters? It was nice to have something to read while I couldn't write. That's my only excuse for not reviewing the other chapters like I normally do. I was caught up in my own writing and I had to wait until I hurt my shoulder so that I could sit down and actually read. XD Anyway, I am starting to feel sorry for Draco something fierce. Harry's gone beyond stupid and into moronic territory. I guess he should be glad that he got that one little scene with Harry before the git did something truly stupid. I'd offer him a hug, but I don't think that's wise. And thank goodness that Ron at least made Harry FACE the fact that he wants to play mattress tag with Draco. ^_^ Can't wait for the new chapter. I think I'll start your new WiP while I'm still recovering. (Btw, typing with one hand sucks!) ~ Mako
person SP777
schedule March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #11...

You know, for a second I thought Draco was going to keep Harry in that
vault[?], as the 'treasure' he was after. But, that would have ruined
everything, yes?

..and for the record I feel sorry for Draco, he cares but the way he is
doing it is way over in left field.
person AlterEquis
schedule March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yeah harry does not seem all that smart in this story.

I guess he will open his eyes at some point ;)
person SP777
schedule March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

Codename: H.O.T. - 'Hardcore Oral Tittilation or Harry's Oral Tittilation'

AHHHH!!!! :-O Oh My God! You went there AND delivered! I'm
SO proud. *sniffles* I don't know whether to have a cheesy
grin or run around the room and fangurl squeal. :-p

Harry has a new title...'Boy-Who-Lived', Defeater of the Dark Lord, Man-Who-Lived,
annnnd...CockTeaser'! That wasthe steamiest thing to read, mah dear, and you're right
Draco is going to come hard [try his best] with the pursuit of Harry now. :-)

Okay, enough praise...next chapter por favor.
schedule March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*eyebrows climb into hair.
In-ter-esting! perhaps har is more up for honey trapping than i thought. It's going to take a great deal of control on his part though and i seriously doubt that Draco is naive enough, no matter how he desires har, to simply leave any evidence laying about. If nothing else, draco has done har a favour on one level. He's forcing him to LIVE again, to think outside his confined little rule box. I think that can only be a good thing.
schedule March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
indeed. i agree with malfoy. Har's going to need to up his game if he wants malfoy to take him seriously. I wonder when he tagged him with that spell... not that he didn't have plenty of opportunity.
person SP777
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
con't...

I know the popular thing to write is 'Harry is a terrible dancer', BUT
just this once..or twice..in your story or future story if you can't fit it
here, can't Harry at least sway in a dance of seduction?

Codename: H.O.T
person AlterEquis
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm Ron seems quite bright in this story. . .
But still it's wait and see I guess, or wait and read!
person Molly
schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story ssoo much!!1 Plz write more soon!!