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February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry, he needs a vacation from all this mayham...I love this story, it is so adorable...
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February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
harry turns into a fox, owww so cute...
i thibk remus should turn harry's side, after all harry is his best friend son. at first a little scepticall(or whatever it is written) of going against harry but in the end follow harry
i thibk remus should turn harry's side, after all harry is his best friend son. at first a little scepticall(or whatever it is written) of going against harry but in the end follow harry
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February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Remus should always be loyal to Harry, not Dumbledore...and probably by extension Sirius. Oh I do hope he lays into Dumbledore if he thinka logically about what he has done to Sirius and Harry.
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February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cute so far ^.^ Watch out for spelling, seen a lot of 'Han' and I think you mean either hand(s) or than. Other than some slight misses like that, I've enjoyed it so far. Can't wait to see where you take this...I love little kit Harry, I want to snuggle and coo!
Leania
Leania
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February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nods agreement. besides, with har in slyth, the others can guard him... which he sounds like he needs very badly. I am interested though, in what it would take to make harry arc up and fight back rather than his current whimper/ cringe response.
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February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another interesting chapter, though i'd take another look at how you ended it, the way you worded it made it seem like you were talking about the past two years of harry's life, not that year and the next; you might want to actually say something along the lines of "his second year passed much the same as the first". also, you need to read back through for spelling errors, two that i remember in particular were "raven laws" and "growing hexes". that said, i look forward to seeing where you go with this
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February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more...Glad you are doing a bit of a time skip it...
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February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love Remus don't make him a bad guy. Maybe you can have it so that dumbledore had spells cast on Remus and it kept in his wolf locked up. Oh and his misinformed siruis to hating tom ant stuff. Lol those are my fav characters in the Ho series
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February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, Lupin's been brainwashed by Dumbles for decades, so he'll start in dumbles camp. But he is a dark creature and understands about mates, and as the DADA professor, should understand that separating a incubus mate from it's incubus is essentially a death sentence, so I think he should come around in the course of the year.
Love submissive Harry... Although after spending the entire summer with Tom, I hope second year was slightly better than his first year (with only a few weeks to feed from Tom before the stress.)
Love submissive Harry... Although after spending the entire summer with Tom, I hope second year was slightly better than his first year (with only a few weeks to feed from Tom before the stress.)
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February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Harry would make an adorable fox. You would wonder that Tom can let him out of his sight for school. Sirius is a Black. Can't he be brought around to Tom's way of thinking. This made me smile