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by ara51089

person dumbass
schedule April 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"ron you are a terrible person for being jealous for no reason whatsoever."

"even though i'm actually lying to you, fully aware what i'm doing is wrong, have no excuse for my actions except i'm a selfish bitch, and i am going to fuck malfoy sooner or later. because apparently i have the hots for spineless twits who hurl racist slurs at me and wish i was dead for seven years and stand by and watch me get tortured. oh yeah, i'm going to abort your child without telling you. but don't forget, you're the asshole and i deserve better"

-hermione 'massively ooc' granger

i mean jesus. infidelity can be hot and interesting, but put some fucking effort in
person Kristina
schedule March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was brilliant, you captured so much history in so few words it could have almost been a one shot. Glad it isn't, though, and I'm officially pestering you to update!
person anonymous
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, what happens next? Or should I ask, what also happened in the past... before she got pregnant a third time (questionably) and after Ron "blows up" on her having lunch with another man?
person nicola
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great job! i really really like this story!
person paigeey07
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i really do like this story, very much!