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by TransientTemptation

schedule March 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good keep going
person WesleyY7
schedule March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so behind on reading your updates! Hope you can forgive me for reading this one first!

Same basic premise, but I love how this is not a replica of Benefactor. Narcissa is plotting and manipulating to turn bright little Hermione into a submissive living doll (The perfect skin and teeth, the bouncing ringlets, the silk and lace clothes.) The journey will be interesting because as bright as Hermione is, she has been friendless and has such a desire to please and be the teacher's pet.

The DreamScape potion sounds wicked too!
schedule March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
damn that chapter was too short!
schedule February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
more please!
person WesleyY7
schedule February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You once mentioned reviews often inspired you to write, so here's hoping this will be an inspiration to you. Although, I'm not sure what kind of words one would use to inspire you to continue a story such as this... :P How about you're awesome and this story is wickedly addicting and I hope I can rave my wand and make you update and if it will help, I'll head on over to Benefactor and bug your there too. Cannot wait to see where this one will go!!
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*stay glued on my laptop waiting for next chapter* enough said more please :F
schedule January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! Never read a fic like this b4!!! I wasnt even gonna read it but it just DREW me in! I just HAD to read it! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE (as soon as you can of course XD)
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Why doesn't this have more reviews? Why are you not receiving more pleas for more? This is just as sinfully delicious, if not more, as Benefactor. I eagerly await reading trusting Hermione brought to awareness by a seductive Narcissa. Is it wrong to beg for more?
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
continue please jajajaja
person oronochi
schedule January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mm, what a delicious fic as always. I cannot wait to see how this evolves, especially the training. Keep up the great work!