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August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far!
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June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story! i cant wait to see what will happen next, please update soon
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February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and can't wait to read more
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February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i loved it please keep witting this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay, so happy to see more of this story, love the way you handle the myriad relationships between the characters asa well as their personalities. keep up the good work, i can't wait to see more of this :)
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January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting. This is a different take on things. I look forward to the other chapters. I will come back and review then. ^_^
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January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OKay. I was going to wait until the end of the chapters that were posted and give you an overall review but....but... I think I am going to like this Harem thing. lol. Maybe not a Harem but...damn it all it sounds like it.
Now, I have read Anita Blak up too...the book after Narcissa in Chains. I cannot remember the book afterwards because I think I was upset.
It's a good series but...i believe the Ms. Hamilton lost where she was going with the plot line. I mean..come on...plot shows up then its awash in SEX. I love sex but...jeez...the beginning of the series was AWESOME then ...blah.
Anyways, back to your fic, so far....its really good and I am enjoying it. I personally do not like Anita as a character person. She annoys me so much and she doesn't know how to GIVE she only takes. but... I will withhold judgement, I would like to see how you portray her. I do like characters with redeeming qualities but only if...its written well. Not some kind of fantastic BS.
Anyways, on to the next chapter. I do feel that this review was rather disjointed. lol
Now, I have read Anita Blak up too...the book after Narcissa in Chains. I cannot remember the book afterwards because I think I was upset.
It's a good series but...i believe the Ms. Hamilton lost where she was going with the plot line. I mean..come on...plot shows up then its awash in SEX. I love sex but...jeez...the beginning of the series was AWESOME then ...blah.
Anyways, back to your fic, so far....its really good and I am enjoying it. I personally do not like Anita as a character person. She annoys me so much and she doesn't know how to GIVE she only takes. but... I will withhold judgement, I would like to see how you portray her. I do like characters with redeeming qualities but only if...its written well. Not some kind of fantastic BS.
Anyways, on to the next chapter. I do feel that this review was rather disjointed. lol
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January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm back. Yes, i know you are rolling your eyes right now or probably even laughing but it's imperative that I leave this review.
Anita's professional attitude was absolutely marvelous. I love that her prof. character is separate from her personal character. Simply marvelous.
She's still an uber bitch though. lol.
Even though th HP world is moving in on the St. Louis Crew....its not much. Just key people. I like the outcome. I hope we get to see everyone in action but hopefully more focus on the St. Louis crew than the HP crew.
Review over. lol.
Anita's professional attitude was absolutely marvelous. I love that her prof. character is separate from her personal character. Simply marvelous.
She's still an uber bitch though. lol.
Even though th HP world is moving in on the St. Louis Crew....its not much. Just key people. I like the outcome. I hope we get to see everyone in action but hopefully more focus on the St. Louis crew than the HP crew.
Review over. lol.
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January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jean-Claude. Having a bitch for a girlfriend...is truly a bitch. Damn...
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January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please notify me when you update. I would really appreciate it since I am in Japan and the time frames are probably different. lol
I like it. its different. interesting. nice paced. enough bitchyness from Anita..though i believe she should have at least... apologized though i see that it is not coming at all.
I wish to see more of her and Harry clashing because that would have been fun. I like someone to take Anita down a few pegs but I will be content with this.
Also, will Anita let Asher in Jean-Claude's bed now that her, Jean and Rich had been doing it? *grins* i wonder? say no... and the fireworks will be explosive. say yes and i will be slightly sad.
Anyways.... my email she be available to you. if not...i will locate your story again in a few days to chk for updates.
I like it. its different. interesting. nice paced. enough bitchyness from Anita..though i believe she should have at least... apologized though i see that it is not coming at all.
I wish to see more of her and Harry clashing because that would have been fun. I like someone to take Anita down a few pegs but I will be content with this.
Also, will Anita let Asher in Jean-Claude's bed now that her, Jean and Rich had been doing it? *grins* i wonder? say no... and the fireworks will be explosive. say yes and i will be slightly sad.
Anyways.... my email she be available to you. if not...i will locate your story again in a few days to chk for updates.