rate_review Reviews

I would have loved  for asher to be the father of one baby

I pray that its honesty because i love lucius

Really bad ass i still think asher should be a dad to harrys kids like they have parents or ones asher and the other severus

I changed my mind i like that anita will allow Nathaniel to be with harry and sev i also think that asher should heal his lower body scar tissue bt penis. And i love that Richard has J.C.  and ron draco. Huge part would love anita not to be  able to have kids and harry to get knocked up bt severus and asher  to have teddy change his look to be combanation of each of the guys

Please don't take this the wrong way, I know that as the author of this story you reserve the right to do whatever you want with the characters, but I kinda feel like you didn't actually read any of the books. I was super excited to see that someone had made a crossover of two of my favorite series, but the longer I read the more disappointed I was. Literally none of the characters are being portrayed as they actually are. None of them would have acted the way that they are being written in this story. Once again, I realize that it is the prerogative of the author to change whatever he/she wants to suit their story, but this is so far beyond non-canonical that I can't get into the story :(

I know it has been awhile since you updated, but have to say I love this story. My favorite part for chapter 8 was Olaf being a Goyle and his interactions with Harry. I hope you update this story again.

Love this story and really wish you would pick it back up. :)

This is such an exquisite take on the two worlds, I would love to read more! :D

Hope to read more soon.

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I have enjoyed this very much. I hope you find time to finish it someday as I would love to read the ending:)