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February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a fun story, I hope you write more for it. Keep up the good work!
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May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hoe you get a chance to finish your stories one day - very interesting ideas
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August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter! Loved it!!♥♥♥ Please alert me when the next chapter is up!
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November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story and its plot !!!!
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February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing Story! Cant wait to read more of it and find out all the cliffhangers you left :-)
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January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh how interesting ^.^ I can't wait to read more, my suggestion only to be careful of missing words and such. Over all a lovely job and I await the next.
Leania
Leania
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January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story, even the fast pace. Could you decide if snape is teaching potions or dada? Looking toward the next segment.
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January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have very much enjoyed the beginning of this story but there was a rather large mistake. At the beginning you wrote that Snape was the DADA Prof and Slughorn, so that Dumbles can try to make Harry get the memory, was teaching Potions. Then when Snape de-ages you write that he had 32 students blow up their cauldrons, implying that he is the potions master. I'm sure Slughorn just got forgotten momentarily and you would get back to him but right now the story continuity is broken.
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January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
first off just let me say this is f'king brilliant and i dearly hope you're continuing it.
Dumbles is a slimy rat bastard and i hope Sev and Har set up their own side, cause as the leader of the so called light, he is epic freakin' fail.
troublesome trio. snickers lol. Awwww, whatsa matter dumbles. Can't control you little weapon? boo hoo, the worlds smallest violin playing just for you.
Har and Sev are so much smutty fun together. they're awesome. I do hope Luc switches.
Dumbles is a slimy rat bastard and i hope Sev and Har set up their own side, cause as the leader of the so called light, he is epic freakin' fail.
troublesome trio. snickers lol. Awwww, whatsa matter dumbles. Can't control you little weapon? boo hoo, the worlds smallest violin playing just for you.
Har and Sev are so much smutty fun together. they're awesome. I do hope Luc switches.
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January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh damn, the first reviewr has a point. damn plot holes. grrrr.