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What is up with all the sass sass at the end of words and stuff. Your ruining the story the other girl started

Hey, I read this story for looong time, since Aya wrote 1st chap... and now I re-read it till new chap of your... I like it, so I hope you will update soon...

please remember or confirm for yourself..... 'fourth' = numbers/counting/placement or positioning - 'fourth in line for the throne. 'forth' is usually related to 'forward'- go 'forth' and prosper

You know I was thinking, Harry had a magically enforced injunction against Dumbledore so he cannot meddle in his affairs, I was wondering if that made it so he couldn't meddle in anything to do with Harry or if it was just his living situation he couldn't poke into. I thought about that because I was wondering if that would end up affecting whether or not he could implant the visions because they are essentially a manipulation of Harry and could possibly trigger the injunction. I mean how awful would that be for Dumbledore if he tries to implant a vision but cannot, and the whole time Tom and Harry are just waiting for it to happen with no idea why it hasn't. Anyways really excited to read the next chapter, hope you update soon.

I am so happy that you continued this story! I love where you're going with this so please please please tell me you havent abandoned this fic and that you will update soon ! I can't wait for more, thankyou for writing this :-D

Omg. Your continuation is absolutely brilliant and thrilling. I discovered the original stories a couple of days ago and was so happy to see someone chose to continue writing! I love yout style and can only congratulate you on your work! Amazing! Cannot wait for more! Thanks!

Chapter 66 - Everything's building up. Looking forward to the climax.

haii I hope you continue to write this FF sasel

I like how you've handled the plot so far. I especially liked how Wormtail felt. Surely the situation rankled him and it was good of you to stake it into account and incorporate it into the plot. It makes the plot more realistic. The only thing I can complain about are the huge paragraph breaks. It would reduce my scrolling quite a bit if those were a bit smaller.

Chapter 42 - If Harry uses the 24 hr time turner to exist in two places at onces, how do any owls know which Harry they should deliver letters to? Especially if there is no address and only the name on the envelope?