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person Mia
schedule October 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The story is good written. The characters personality like you said are different from previous Autor.  It is noticeable. But overall it is a good continuation. Ad am happy that someone is writing the story since it would to sad to be discontinued.  Good luck and will be waiting for more chapters. 

person Eaglexeyes
schedule September 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love this continuation of a great story...

 

It's great....

 

Keep writing as life allows?

 

person Nate
schedule September 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You MUST write mooooreee!! *Breaths on my fingers that's frozen from sitting outside the cafe all night stealing their net to read the last 10+ chapters* So cold... Anyway... This story is so awesome, I have to know how it goes!!! :D

More I say! MOREEEEE! *Flops face first into the asphalt* Okay... I guess I'll go home and take a hot bath now. *Laughs* Man, I HATE being between internet companies. >>

Your story is awesome tho, keep it up! :D

person Nate
schedule September 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I was honestly worried if -anyone- could continiue the genious of the origional autor, but you've written it beautifully. *Smiles* However, you are a bit too nice, I suspect... 

Tom is still evil. I would imagine both he and Harry would not just scare, butntorture and kill Harry's relatives. And Ron being a deep thinker seems a bit out of character, tho I do not know were you're going with it yet. But if it is to have Harry keep him as a friend, that is kinda very inconsistent with the rest of the story. *Frowns* Still... I have high hopes for this story, I really am looking forward to read the rest. And I'm greatful someone took it upon them to finish it, this IS my favorit HP story off all times. (And yes, I included the origional books. J.K. Rowling struggles with the logic of reality and psychology and tends towards illogical fairytail stuff. *Laughs*)

person Eaglexeyes
schedule September 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love this continuation of a great story...

 

It's great....

 

Keep writing as life allows?

 

person Eaglexeyes
schedule September 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Again the boy who lived

person Sky-beat
schedule September 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hi,

can i ask you with which chapter did you start, since Athy finished at 26, i dont find the end of her story or did you adapt the whole thing,

Thx

person Sky-beat
schedule September 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Sorry, found it,

 

person Diri
schedule August 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hi, 

Ordinarily I'm not one to review but... I love the story, the plot and the fact that you keep writing it. There is only one thing that bugs me - you use the world 'plenty' very often (very). Just something to keep in mind while writing. 

Have a nice evening, 

Diri

person A reader
schedule August 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm really glad that you updated this story.
Too many story remain unfinished and this one is simply too good to be abandoned.
The idea about Arthur was good.
I'm waiting to find out what will happen with the Elder Wand!
Please, keep on writing this story!
You're doing an excellent job with it!