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Liked the new chapter but feel the need to point out something. This being that Harry and Tom both are aware that the ring is the stone from the Second of the three brothers. Also Harry having told Draco that the new headquarters is his while Evan told the same to Draco's mom seems risky to me. I'm glad to see the story continuing as I am a big fan of it, so thanks and good luck. I will be watching for updates ;}

hi, I only want to tell you that Vodie and Harry already know about the ring, in chapter 18 when the portrait of Jheames tell them about the cloak and the three brothers they learn about the ring.

Sorry if my english is bad, but it isn

you have a different writing style to be sure but the chapters not bad it felt a little rushed in places and i am personally having a little trouble with your interpretation of snape
you foreshadowed him figuring out that evan is harry a little to strongly that was my main issue with that but i like how you wrote harry he still seemed like the same person and he is the main character so i get that you would focus on his characterization most

the only continuity issues are that tom and harry find out about the hallows in chapter 17 its a little past halfway through the chapter when harry is having a discussion with a potter family portrait

also snape tells tom that dumbledore told him about the kiss he saw so harry would know what that weird assessing look in snapes eye is

thank you for writing i was so excited when i heard someone had taken the reigns and decided to continue this

I cannot wait for your chaps. I am also sure that each will be magnificient. :)

I dont know about anyone else but I look forward to the ride...this story was too good to let die...thank you for taking the challenge

happy dances in place and breaks into song. "Im so excited... and i just can't hide it... she's about to take control and it think i'll like it!" eh, so a paraphrased a bit. still, you get they idea.
I can't wait to see what happens next.

am i completely delusional or do i detect a hint or two of your own subtle touch in that chappie. i don't remember reading that the first time round... but considering that was at least two months ago, so that's not really saying much. >>
anyway, it was good, but will tom mind har spilling his guts to draco without even a hint of oath or binding to guard his mind or keep his mouth shut under duress?
Poor siri, he just can't let that go can he? still, if remi embraces his inner wolf then maybe it'll make it easier for him.

I am so glad that Harry has someone to confine in...It makes him appear more like a teenage boy he is and that makes the story more believeable. I really like that Draco was incorperated in this story. The relationship with Siri and Harry is what you would expect it would be with differening political views. Great chapter look forward to more...

i am so addicted to this story...i love how the characters interact with each other...their depth is what makes the story so engaging

I love this fic, i hope that you will publish all the chapters that the author writes very soon, so we can read what you have in mind for this fic!!
see you next!!