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woah, dumbles really is loosing his touch huh. Still, i can't help but be glad and amused that his plans were torpedoed this time out.
apart from being har's first friend in the WW he and Ron never really did have much in common, especially when har decided to start being himself.

Wow! Great chapter and the intrigue gets thicker and thicker. Now the Weasley's realize what is going on, can't wait to read more.

I'm so glad that you took up this fic. I'm really looking forwards to seeing where you take this. I love the way that you're writing Harry and can't wait to see what old Dumbles comes up with next. I hope right before he dies that Harry and Tom both get to show him just how much his plans backfired.

Okay! YOu missed something! Just so you know, Aya changed her name to Athey for one, and for two, Harry already retrieved the ring from Dumbledore. I think.

So the plot thickens, the bastard! Its been a while since I caught up with this one since I've been busy, but it's one of those stories that you easily get back into and remember what was going on. So is Sev going to figure it out himself, or will he be told? How will Lucius react? Oh I can't wait for the next chapter; keep up the good work!

Leania

I dont like Dumbledore. I hope Harry and Voldemort win. Cant wait for more!

Thank you so much for adopting this story! You're doing a good job so far of maintaining the high quality of the original.

The recent chapters aren't bad at all! The length isn't short enough to be annoying and you obviously have enough imagination to make the plot INTERESTING, cause i would've completely stopped reading if the take-over writer was someone who wrote 2 paragraph chapters and couldn't be f***** to give each character their own thoughts and views on what was happening. I also like how your continuing with what Aya did (following the original hp story line a little). Anyway.... these new chappies are great. and i'd just like to tell you, even if people don't review this story, i'm sure they really like this and would be heartbroken if it stopped XD.

~Good luck!

What a motherfucker!!! Light Lord my ass! I'd like to say that you're doing an excellent job continuing this story. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Yay! Update. *bounces happily.
Har's got more guts than me, going willingly back into agony like that.
Tsk. As it should, messing with Hars head like that. I hope it took a third of what was left of his life off him. Couldn't happen to a nicer prick.
Naughty, naughty dumbles. And here i thought it was up to magic to pick the next Lord. Still, he still has no clue just how little control he has over Har does he? Well, at least har is making it seem like Dumbles plan is coming together. I wonder how he plans to 'nudge' Ron into attempting to get Har to Horcrux hunt.