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schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
consider how busy your are, thanks for taking the time to give us an up date.
if those 'visions' are draining on har, imagine what they;re like for dumbles. he must be burning up his magic at a fearful rate for this.
hehe... i wonder how luc will feel knowing his kid probably knew before he did. ^^ ah, his face would be priceless. :P
sounds like a bit of a complicated plan. lets just hope it doesn't come apart on them.
*blinks... so dear bell bell is awake huh. wah, that's gonna and a spicy new element to things, cause while bells is fanatically loyal to v, she's still mad as a march hair and nuttier than a squirrel's winter stash. I'm not sure how well she'll cope with, or even take in, that her lord now has a mate and 'equal'.
heh, snapes face on that particular raid should be a lot of fun too.
person kyuubichild717
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Will Draco speak to his father about what Harry has told him, possibly putting things together? Will Snape see Lily's son after the burning? How will things with the Weaselys worl out? I don't want Harry to lose them or Sirius completely. Lucius reaction was great though. Bella is not going to try anything I hope. It would devistate Lady Malfoy if she lost her again.
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What you said about Snape, I'm not so sure.

I don't believe that Snape having the evidence that Harry was treated the way he was would instantly get Snape to "like" Harry, that's true.

But, in my opinion, I think Snape would stop thinking Harry to be as bad as his father, he would at least respect what Harry went through and be somewhat more bearable, but I think the emotions Snape would feel most would be guilt that he allowed "Lily's son" or any child live a similar life to him and that it would cause Snape to become so enraged at Petunia that he was the one to torture her and do her in. Especially if he considers that Petunia may have even done something similar to Lily if she had gotten the chance. Also Petunia should have known that trying to "stamp out" the magic was impossible since she had been around him growing up and probably had some idea that his father abused him, though he probably did hide it and she probably didn't pay attention to such things.
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very cool chapter, with Lucius reaction being my favorite. I am curious on how Bella is going to act.
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this story. I was so excited to see another chapter up. Poor Lucius. Given his reaction, I think Snape will die of shock when he finds out. I wonder what it will do to Bella's mental state when she learns the truth. Keep up the good work and thanks for writing such an intriguing story.
person ILoveWyatt
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!
person Sharon T
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVEInG the story and hope you continue:-)
person Godessonmyknees
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I am so, so glad you have taken this story over. You are writing it wonderfully. So what will Hermione share with the group?

Can't wait for more.
person oogies4u
schedule September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
got to say I love this story.. Is there a way you can let me know when you update this again please?!?!

My E-mail is ... oogies4u@gmail.com

Thanks much

DragZ
person ryuuta
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It really bugs me that Hermione has such a strong sense of entitlement. Is it perhaps the result of some spell Dumbledore has her under? Making someone tell everything about a sensitive subject no matter how it makes them feel does not sound what a decent person would do.