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person Grinedel
schedule November 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear. That is one mean cliffhanger. I hope you'll update quickly. Keep up the good work!
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person qwerty
schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I hope Sirius makes it out alive! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
person GoddessonmyKnees
schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved watching Siri's thought processes. It seems like he is going to have to go sooner then he thought.

Can't wait for more.
schedule November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now that was truly unexpected! Loved that!
schedule November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must congratulate you! Really! You have taken this story up absolutely brilliantly. It conveys the original spirit of it perfectly, though your own plot twists are just as brilliant in my books. I'm happily lookig forward to the next update.
schedule November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I believe you meant Evan instead of Evans here. You have used it incorrectly about a dozen times. Though I think Harris would have been more appopriate to use in Snape's POV, since they do not seem to be overly familiar.
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved the original story and was really sad that the author wasn't interested in it anymore. I was so excited when I found out you adopted it. I think you did a great job at continuing the story and can't wait for another chapters.
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please don't forget to reveal Hermione's family, preferably soon. I'd love for her to be descended from a Malfoy, Lestrange or Black squib. You're doing a great job continuing this fic - thank you so much for adopting it!
person Godessonmyknees
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.

I love Luc's reaction. Very funny. I also like how Harry and Narcissus are getting along. It will probably be hard for Luc not to pale when she tells him.

Can't wait for more.
person Toushou-sama
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
BEST STORY EVER. Sorry 'bout the Caps Rage. I can't wait until your next chapter! :)