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Hmm I think Bill needs to talk to his brothers! Ah I really can't wait for Dumbledore to die ^_^

Just caught up on all the new chapters & I'm loving where you're taking this:) Thank goodness I caught up at this chapter rather than the last one with the Sirius cliffhanger! Can't wait to see what happens next - thanks for sharing this with all of us:)

I look forward to more. I've enjoyed how you're working with this!

Well I have just finished reading what you have written since taking over the story. You are doing really well, you have settled into the rhythm of the story & are bringing a new freshness to it. I like how you have maintained all the characters & haven't proceeded to do away with any or throw a curve ball through the plot. I am so glad that someone is doing something about the Dursley's & getting Harry his independence. Bringing Sirius into the fold will be interesting to read as his cousin is in the infirmary & Sirius has little self discipline, I look forward to reading the chaos he may create (hint hint). Pleased that the intensity of Harry & Voldemort's relationship has not slackened. Reading Dumbledore's behavioural deterioration certainly brings to the front of the debate what is light? what is good? what is right? Have fun with that one!
Looking forward to read more of this story. Thankyou.

Just read the first of your chapters, looks good so far although i'd suggest a second beta, some of the grammar is a little off and makes some sentences difficult to read. Otherwise, keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.

Having read Athey's work before yours, I must say that I am impressed with your continuation. You have kept the spirit of the original and built off of it; making it yours while not breaking the flow, especially in stories of this size is not easy. I commend you for that accomplishment and can't wait to see how you keep going with this. Keep up the great work!

you almost got me there until when the elf popped in. thanks for updating...can't wait for the next chapter. I so envy you for being able to write like this. :)

Really happy to see this story has been adopted. Look forward to seeing how you incorporate Sirius into Abby life, how things are evolving for Remus and the wolf packs, what surprises Hermione's family tree might reveal, how the new History professor will turn out (Frienze took over Divination again?), and just what will become of Harry and Tom. When will Harry tell Draco about Nick being Tom being Voldemorte and Harry being Evan being Raideomorte? Lucius now knows, and there's the lovely anticipation of what Harry will do to the Dursleys. Oh, and I wondered about the lawyer--if he's Longbottom's layer, too, couldn't Harry ask Neville/Augusta for an introduction, thereby adding another layer of distance from the DEs. Since Dumbles seems to be pushing things, will he up timeframe from what we're familiar with in the books? Will he still try to use Sirius? Will there be any other hang-ups from the soul bond between Harry and Tom? Is there a chance of a surprise mpreg? Oh, now wouldn't that speed up Tom's plans to eliminate Dumbles and get Harry out of Hogwarts that much sooner! Ha!
Hope the muses visit and keep your fingers busy!

LOVED IT!!!!!! awesome I really can't wait until you update!!!! I always end up re reading this whole story so many times!!! I love that Sirius is there now....maybe he will be more okay with the dark? I don't know but AWESOME!!!

Wonder where you'll go from there. I'm looking forward to more.