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person ILoveWyatt
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope Bill realizes the truth about Albus Dumbledore, and then maybe he could pretend to become the Light Lord and give Harry and Voldemort imformation on what Dumbledore is telling him. Hopefully Dumbledore wouldn't find out.

I hope Harry somehow gets the ring that Dumbledore took off before he decided to take a nap.

Maybe Sirius and Barty could start going out together. Maybe Barty could be submissive. I read in another story where Sirius and Barty were going out with each other and Barty was submissive. I really liked it!

I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!
person Rebecca
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Still enjoying each update as they come. I think there should be someone or something in Dumble's office thay leads Harry to be able to get the stone early. I know that Snape was observing for the chance to snatch it and now would be the perfect time. They would also be able to find out other bits about what Dumbles is up to. Keep it coming though don't rush just on my account.
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
well, gotta give Siri this, he's certainly right up there in the dramatic meet-the-pseudo-parent/introduce-my-badarse-lover-to-the-pseudo-parent department. no planning necessary. this is all kinds of awkward.
not that he got much say in it, but i'm glad Siri has enough in the way of gryff guts to trust har and let V check him over.
Hah! we all knew he'd cave. Like Siri could refuse having har near by AND his pleading puppy dog stare. ^^
the separate cottage is good... does har have the com mirror? I can't remember. if he did tho he could get in touch with Siri easily with no chance of accidental meetings between them and us, so to speak.

good grief dumbles is such an arrogant arsehat. it never even seems to occur to him that all his plotting and mucking about is only going to make things worse, let alone entertain the possibility he could be wrong. Not to mention that magic doesn't like being forced and could very well void dumbles choice... but, i'm betting that didn't occur to his fevered brain either.

nor is she going to either. well, that shows he's well aware of what the ring is anyway. good luck getting it away from him now har.


well done abe. you do your level best to keep a decent lad from becoming a dumble pawn. i don't know if it'll take but abe can't say he didn't do his best.

i'm sort of hoping dumbles current tendency to rush things and not check back on them will once against turn round to bite his arse. it would be delicious if just previous to his death, dumbles could get to see all his plans crumble to nothing and become dust in his hands... >> still, got a ways to go yet before we get anywhere near such an event. we still gotta rubblise privet drv first and ooooh, that'll be fun.

pity har can't opt to holiday in grimmald to met up with lupin and siri... he could use that time to make off with the more interesting bits of the library... after all, no one knows he and siri are in mote regular contact...



schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was an unexpected turn again. I love your plot settings! Can't wait to see more.
person Lourdes
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great update!
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person Maris
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter. Bill was always my favourite light character and I,m happy that in your story he won't be mindless sheep.
person Amanda
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Like what your doing but the ring is no longer with albus harry took it already other then that good job
person Malenk
schedule January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i don't get why you had to go out of your way and create so many new points of view since you picked up this story.
i found the part with lucius and narcissa particularly pointless and boring.
also, despite you explanations, i didn't see a valid reason for revealing the secret of harry's identity to lucius in the first place.
person Grinedel
schedule January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Thank you so MUCH!
Sirius doesn't know about Harry being Voldemort's lover does he? Can't wait to know how he'll react.
Albus must die. PAINFULLY!!!!

Love and Kisses
person savannah19742001
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So great to see a new chapter and it was such an interesting one. Can't wait to see more....