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I am hopelessly and shamelessly hooked on this story! I am anxiously waiting for more!

I hope Bill doesn

Ah, that was interesting. But I really was hoping to finally find out about Hermione's heritage.

geh, snapes as charming as usual >>

well done bill. don't let yourself be suckered. those instincts are blaring for a reason.

whoa, har, seriously smooth going there. somehow i expected the ring snatch to be more complicated. good thinking har, pockets no place for a valuable trinket like that.

whats even funnier though, dumbles didn't even realise he'd been jobbed. he is REALLY losing it huh. sloppy dumbles, seriously sloppy.

Hi. First I want to say that in the last 36 hours( with breaks for sleep and potty..lol) I have read the both of the original author's stories that began this. I was a little leery about reading an adoption of The Breeding Darkness, because those usually turn out badly. But I have to say that you have taken this story, and gone with the original authors notes and while keeping to her planned premise, have taken it ways that I can enjoy. Your style of writing is not identical to her's, but that is to be expected, but your style compliments her's well enough that the transition is not to shocking. I am enjoying your continuation of this and am looking forward to reading more. You are doing an awesome job.

I am glade, that you write the story. Youre writting style is super and I can read it fluently.
Sirius and Tom ... :D poor siri he have to thought over his opinion

But some szenes are missing... So the talk between Dray and Harry or sev and Voldemord fter Harrys vision. I wate for the szene, when Sev discover Harry is Evan XD

love LaLiLu

I really like this story and I'm looking forward to what happens next.

Surely Bill won't be that stupid...I mean when your guts says no then one should listen to it. As usual you write a brilliant story and I can't wait for more.

Awesome!!! I love your story!!! hope you update soon!!

Thank you for the sequel! :)