rate_review Reviews

I the way you're taking the story. There's just one thing that bothers me about it. You keep telling us things: 'That pleased him' 'That annoyed him'. I would rather deduce that for myself by reading the characters' expressions and actions, not having to be told.

Finally caught up, can't wait for more!

Hey there! I really loved this chapter, it's brilliant how each chapter builds new layers into the story all the time. I can't wait to see what Peter has planned with Sirius. I'm pretty sure it won't be anything good and it definitely won't be good for Peter's health if he is caught, especially if it's Harry doing the catching. Remus as well seems to be giving quite some thought into what Harry told him and I wonder what he wrote in that letter. Really looking forward to seeing what happens now and I hope that Sirius will stay safe ;D.

Oh what does Wormtail have up his sleeve; if only they could obliviate his memories. Didn't you have that down at some point or was that probably another story? I don't remember and I've read so many stories. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!

Leania

I am in love with this story both the parts done by the original author and your contributions to it. on a side note with this site being the way it is and all I was wondering if you has a regular update schedule or it you could email me when you are going to post a new chapter, because i will forget to check for updates and i really want to see what happens next.

Questions? Will Snape ever learn the full story? I would love to see his reaction. Will the people who are on the Light side who are beginning to question what hey think they know ever find out the full extent of whats going on? Is Ron still going to try to repair his friendship with Harry now that he know he was manipulated? You know what i;m gonna stop asking questions now -as they will likely go unanswered- and wait for the next update.

Good to see an update; irritating that I don't stay logged in as much anymore though. Interesting twist and turns, I wonder if Dumbledore will try to foist the mantle of Light Lord on some unsuspecting innocent that suffers the backlash because of it, or if Bill will stall long enough. I loved Lucius' reaction to Harry being 'Evan'; I laughed at the mental image I had. I can't wait to see what Severus' reaction to Harry's home life will be; I know he's supposed to be a caustic bastard, but couldn't he be a bit more friendly after? Perhaps his remarks not so cutting and more...banter? Seeing Harry for himself (baby steps, I know) and maybe attributes reminiscent of Lily since his eyes were opened? He's my favorite...*sigh* but I'll have to take what I get I guess. Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter(s).

Leania

Can you add me to yor milling list for this sorry

I am loving this story this is the first well set of stories where Harry and Voldie are on the same side. Other than the chapters being shorter, I cant really tell the difference in the writting style. I am really looking forward to the next update.

Brandi

It was great.

Great chapter. I am glad they are going to talk to Harry. I hope he can bring them onto his side.

Can't wait for more.