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Great chapter. I love how both Siri and Tom are working to make Harry's life easier.

Can't wait for more.

AWESOME!!!! loving it!!!

Ya!!! A chapter! Was a good chapter. Can't wait for peters plan to blow up in his face, maybe have harry catch Peter in the act of getting rid of sirius and going all junior dark lord on him would be exciting to read about. Maybe a steamy scene between Tom and harry afterwords. Can't wait for Remus to be brought into the "loop" and see sirius again, mbye stay with him in the house. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Awesome!!! Always reading and re-reading your part of the story! Loved the Chapter hope Wormtail gets caught and finally killed! Hope you update soon!!!

Update soon!

Great chapter. I want to skin the rat. I hope they see though him quickly and hurt him.

Can't wait for more.

Brilliant story, I have literally spent the day reading it! I'm very impressed with the take over but am utterly relieved that you stopped with the hissing s's! Whenever I see those, I generally stop reading a story as it's not easy on the eyes. I don't know if it's worth going back and editing them out? I couldn't read what Voldemort was saying but then I think I am a bit dyslexic.
Anyway, congratulations, your writing style is just as good as the original authors and I think it's amazing you've taken it over so well.
Looking forward to the updates :)
Excessively Complex

Uh-oh. What's Wormtail up to? Glad that Remus is finally starting to think for himself and that Bill and Fleur aren't automatically doing what Dumbledore wants. The seeds of doubt sown by Harry are beginning to sprout. Let's see how big they grow!

On another subject, do you also write under the pen name SpeedyTomato? Because your writing styles are almost identical. Just curious.

I have finally finished what you have written so far and I am impressed. I think (yes they are shorter) but you writting fits well with the original author. In fact I like your shorter chapters a little better because some of the originals chapters were too long and hard to get through in one sitting if tired (which I always end up starting a chapter like at 12am and then can't finish due to tiredness)
I would love to be notified when you update that would be awesome.

you need to get on facebook so we can keep up there, I only found htis fic a week or so ago, and read it all in one night, then I went back and read the first int the series , wow it blew me away, I have issues with this site so I can't favourite you but will keep checking