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person Maris
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was scorching hot. You certainly can write sex scenes.
person BlackLily
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!! hope you update soon!!!!
person dinkadot
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVED this chapter, being able to see different sides to both Harry and Tom. Great sex scene I could actually picture it in my head, fantastic! I am very much looking forward to seeing what wormtail has up his slimey furry sleeve, as well as the torture or whatever punishment u have planned for him when the truth of whatever he does comes to light.
Brandi
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, it had been long in coming, was it not? Steamy and hot! Well done!
person Leania07
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, awesome chapter. I had forgotten about the toy until you mentioned it, then I was like, 'oh yeah, bout time they got to it!' LOL. I predict a bit more bondage type sex between those to from the positive reaction from Harry; but I also hope for the slow loving too. Glad they will get a chance to get out of the Abbey and just be together, if for just one day, they deserve it. Keep up the good work, look forward to the next!

Leania
person Diana
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter... Update soon, please!
person fannut
schedule April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know that all of this is really needed but I would rather have the focuses back on Harry and Voldemort. Could you add some more of their interactions and romance next post? I understand that you need to have this background information and I can't wait to hear the prophecy but I would also like a nice steamy sex scene. Can both fit in the next chapter?
Awww! I love Tom being all sweet, but it must have freaked Suris out something awful. It would also be really funny if everyone began to think that Harry and Draco were a couple but the Big-Bad-Dark-Lord might get just a little upset. Like torturing-away-Dracos-sanity-before-he-kills-him upset. I think Voldemort can get a little possessive like that, don't you?
I'm still loving the story and I can't wait for more =)
person Diana
schedule April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person LaLiLu
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
i
schedule April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I missed the Tom and Harry scenes in this one! I like that Sirius and Tom are trying to get along for Harry's sake.