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There's an idea that's been bouncing around in my head... if Voldemort is capable of creating a contract that keeps people from spreading information (like the one he used with Thor's Dark defense club), why doesn't he create another, make the Death Eaters sign it, and then reveal Harry to them? I think the Death Eaters would have a great deal more respect for Evan/Harry if they knew who he was, and possibly more respect for Voldemort in his choice of consort. It would also explain (in their minds) why Harry/Evan isn't dead from the killing curse.

Just a thought.

Love the story!

Oh Severus is still trying to wrap his mind around it, hmm? Probably goes against quite a bit that he [i]thought[/i] he knew. So Lucius is starting to figure it out, hmm? How many more people will have to be let in on the secret; I know Narcissa can be trusted, however there is her constant care of Bella to take into account. Wouldn't want something to accidentally slip, Bella cannot be trusted with that information. Draco knows, yes; Harry being Evan and in a relationship with Voldie? I'll have to scan back a few chapters I guess, to refresh my memory.
This has to be both exciting and frustrating for you to write. On one hand the awesome situations you can toss them in and the spins you can weave really get one's mind active. On the other, you've got to keep that balance (which you've been doing a fabulous job of, by the way) between interest and just throwing them in every problem. I like how you made the burn into the Deathly Hallows symbol; as for hiding that...Well I thought glamour, obviously, because as 'Evan' Harry's scar is hidden. However if it's refusing magic, and it was obvious it showed through the glamour ring, that's not an option. Someone needs the help of a muggle born witch who know's how to apply concealer! Perhaps a half-blood if they were raised in the muggle environment.
Will this bring Hermione in to help, or are you leaving her a content little sheep of Dumbledore's? Tons of concealer or a movie make-up kit, if magic is so resistant, are my ideas on how to hide the new mark. Can't wait to see what you come up with; I look forward to the next!

Leania

Awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Will Sirius and Remus ever join Voldemort? Can you pair Sirius and Rodulphus Lestrange together? I love that pairing!

I love this story! To tell u the truth u are doing a great job finishing where Athey left off! I can't wait till the next chapter!
I hope u will update soon!!!! ^_^

I'm really glad that Sirius and Tom are ok. I hope Harry gets better.

I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!

This update was amazing. I was not expecting that.
It will be a mess with Harry

Ah! Finally some really interesting action. I can barely wait to see what will come out of it! Update soon!

Well, it was a great chapter, thank you. I wanted to ask some questions. First of all, what about the ring? I mean has Dumbledore found out yet that the ring what he is posessing is not the real ring? Because his sister didn't appeared when he called. Don't you think Dumbledore will go mad, if he finds out? So what's the date? Where are we in time?
Other thing: Hogwarts issues? In some ways this is connecting to my first question. Where were Thor or Snape or Dumbledore in the last cuple of chapters? Okay, I get it, they will be in the next chapter, but where were they? 'Lessons' with Dumbledore? Or with the young dark wizards lessons in Hogwarts?
Other thin: Sometime I feel like the characters just repeat themselfs of each other. There is no arguments, everybody understands and agrees and 'on the same opinion' with the other. The conversations are not realistic this way.
For this chapter: when Tom and Harry tested the invisible cloak vs killing curse on a goose, the bird had been undamaged. It could stand up. So why Harry can't?
Don't get me wrong, I love this story, I adore this story but feel like it makes no progress, doesn't go anywhere. Just stopped in a time, and doen't go further.
(Sorry for the grammar or any mistakes I made. I'm not English, I'm Hungarian and I don't speak English well enough, but have to make this review to tell you my opinions)
Please update soon! :D

Great chapter. Wow, never saw that from the rats planing. He is so going to regret living. The way I would handle it is pollyjuice Sirius into Harry and have him live Harry's life.

Can't wait for more.

ooooo can't wait to see how Voldemort handles Harry's dual life! and also Wormtail's fate!
Great chapter!