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LOL wow, who knew that after school play I participated in would pay off! I normally don't wear make-up, and I don't use concealer, but I know of people who use it and when I remembered the play I was like 'AHA!' They do have kits that have synthetic skin, which they could put over the burn, if necessary. Just have to put a gauze over it before applying the 'skin' to keep it from being infected. When I read the mention of 'theatrical make-up' I grinned; I was so pleased to have guessed correctly!
Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!

Leania

Ow, I just found time to review this and I have to say, you are making one hell of a good job carrying Athey's ideas. Congrats to you! Because of the talent you are showing writing this, I even signed your mailing list and started reading your other works. I will try to review more often but no promises.
On another note, if Harry's moniker is supposed to be Portuguese, it's written wrong. I would know, it's my native tongue, haha. It would be Lord Raiodamorte, not Raidodamort, as I read a couple of times. Only a unrelated comment, as mayhaps you did that on purpose.
Keep up the good job!

It goes on!
EVERYONE rubb their mouthes! It

Great chapter!!! This one was really engaging! I'm really excited for the next one!

AWESOME!!!!! hope you update soon!!!! I hope Harry gets better soon he makes the story funny as hell lol

Yea! New chapter!
Glad the boys have a plan in place. Ready for Harry to wake back up. :)

I love this story so much!

I hope Barty can pull it off, being disguised as Harry in Hogwarts.

Cant wait for more!

Love your Story.
i wonder... when will someone realise that Tom is nick? I mean a lot of People know that Harry and Tom are a pair and there articles in the Prophet...

I also wish that there are more Scenes between Tom and Harry. I read the first part of the Story again and i must say I miss the times when they cuddle in the bed and Harry uses Tom as pillow. or when harry lay on the Couch his head on Toms lap and Play with his hairs.

But know there are other Problems, aren`t there?

Waiting for the next chapter

Great chapter. I still think they would do better to pollyjuice someone to take his place for the day.

Can't wait for more.

I have really enjoyed your continuation of Athey's story. You've brought some very unique twists in the story and I think you are doing a great job with your vision of how this tale should go.

Thank you for sharing,

G