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person Tasha
schedule December 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fluff! Gotta love that fluu in there, now and then (or more than that - I'm a sucker for fluff). You're getting me all tense about whatever Dumbles is planning. Though, I know whatever it is, Harry and Tom are pretty much fucking unstoppable, so I'm not worried, in that regard...

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter, as usual. :)

- Tasha
person Magda
schedule November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm very glad, that you decided to continue this story. I love Athey's version, but you handle this wonderfully :). I just have a little "but". Sometimes I'm under impression that you're lost with time. It should be like this - Harry is spending one day in Hogwart, then apparate, then use time changer (goes back 24h) and then he's spending one day in abbey, apparate and goes to sleep in Hogwart. I had to drew it for myself ;p. Yeah, I wrote it here, because i feel that in your part of story are same mistakes in this case. Like in the last chapter - Harry apparated to the castle and the lot were already waiting for him.

Anyway, I love dark Harry and this Harry is really dark. Even if he let Sirius to go out when he's going to interrogate Wormtail. Yeah... that doesn't sound like "even" was good word for this ;p. I also love scenes with sex. Harry is so addorable when he is such submassive to Tom. Especially when you look at him, when he gives orders to the others.
I'm slightly suprise because of Sirius' lack of reaction on the relation between Harry and Tom. I don't belive that he just come to terms with it.

Thank you for your work, and I wish you will write more in near future :).
Good luck :*
person GoddessonmyKnees
schedule November 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I feel bad for Harry. Has Voldie assured him that he will still be loved even if he doesn't come all the way back. I guess I fell like a little mush.

Can't wait for more.
person ILoveWyatt
schedule November 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!
person Jessie
schedule November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!
person Genuka
schedule November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
stupid computer deleted my review, *sulk*

The situation could be used to their advantage, even leaving Snape behind to effectively guard Harry by summoning/contacting Snape after the fact and asking after Harry then making ie letting Snape view a pensive memory of the very important meeting, otherwise it could be seen that Snape isn't viewed as completely trusted. If on the other hand it was made clear to Dumbledore that something was afoot and Snape was left to monitor the situation then brought up to speed it instead provides a feeling of him being more greatly trusted rather than under suspicion. At least to Dumbledore any way...
person GoddessonmyKnees
schedule November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. So now Harry is back a the school. Who is Siri crushing on, is it Remus or maybe Barty?

Can't wait for more.
person D.C. Potter
schedule October 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Godness!
I admire the story and all about it. I'm so glad that you adopted it!
You really do a wonderfull job and I already eagerly await the next chapter! :D
It's fantastic! The ideas of Harry being the Lord of Death or Sirius being his bodyguard (just to name a few) are brilliant!

I'm really looking forward to read the next chapter.

Yours Dean

Ps: Please forgive me, if my English isn't the best (I'm German). ^^"
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Finally, a bit movement in the plot. I thought it'll take ages again.
person ILoveWyatt
schedule October 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope Dumbledore never finds a Light Lord to replace him.

I'm really glad that Harry's getting much better.

I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!