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person ILoveWyatt
schedule January 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!
schedule January 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE this story!!! Keep up the amazing work!
person pooh
schedule January 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM what a soft warm chapter..at least the ending, liked it
person Tlyna
schedule December 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this dark Harry and I adore your Tom Riddle. He is so much more interesting a character than the total egomaniac nut from the books and movies. Truthfully I hated Dumbledore from the first time I saw the first movie as I saw his manipulations even then. I think your Dumbledore is closer to what he really was than as he was portrayed in the movies (never read the last three books or saw the last two movies). Glad neither Bill nor Kingsley were dumb enough to go along with him in trying to become the Light Lord. It is very interesting what you are doing with Hermione. So many write her as a narrow minded goody two shoes who never takes off her blinders when it comes to authority figures. You are letting her actually use her intelligence. Looking forward to see what happens next.
person si_zilla
schedule December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Very succesfull adoption. Thank you for continuing it. You have kept story true to itself and are excellent writer.

I have been hoping for an expicit torture scene since Wormtail cast the AK, and I was quite disappointed when you scipped it. Any hope that you would still write it. I can see several alternatives how you could add it. So. Severus and Lucius/Thorfinn/someone and a pensieve? Or maybe Sirius' POV? Both?

The training session with Skeeter is one my favorite scenes.

So, some torture please.

Thank you for writing this story.
person Genuka
schedule December 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Bella will enjoy the attack on Privet Dr. *grins evilly*
person Diana
schedule December 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person GoddessonmyKnees
schedule December 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I am so glad that Tom reassured Harry.

Can't wait for more.
person Garion
schedule December 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and finally some time alone with Harry/Tom.
I think you are doing great adopting and continue this wonderful series.
The only think missing is the interaction between Harry and Tom and of course some lemons :D I really don't care if it just touching or kissing but develop their relationship more outside of the whole "Dark Lord business".
person ILoveWyatt
schedule December 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!