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October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters. I was so happy when I check in and saw three new chapters. I love what they did and am glad that more people believe Harry. I am very curious as to what Dumbles is going to do.
Can't wait for more.
Can't wait for more.
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October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter! Im sitting on the edge of my seat for the next installment! :)
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October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Now Harry is free. I'm loving the fact Dumbledore go wrong ever again.
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October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg omg another chapter!
Lucius handled the situation well.
I loved Dumbledore's reactions. Those are the moments for which I live. That wonderfully shocked reaction. *laughs maniacally*
Nervous waiting. Pulling off surprise. Bragging to Draco. I liked the bragging part because it relieved the tension of the chapter.
Always looking forward to more :) Can't wait for the big reveal when people will find out that Harry is Dark. Or at least when someone finds out. Maybe he won't out himself to the world. But Dumbles soooo needs to know at some point, just so we can relish in his despair and shocked horror.
Lucius handled the situation well.
I loved Dumbledore's reactions. Those are the moments for which I live. That wonderfully shocked reaction. *laughs maniacally*
Nervous waiting. Pulling off surprise. Bragging to Draco. I liked the bragging part because it relieved the tension of the chapter.
Always looking forward to more :) Can't wait for the big reveal when people will find out that Harry is Dark. Or at least when someone finds out. Maybe he won't out himself to the world. But Dumbles soooo needs to know at some point, just so we can relish in his despair and shocked horror.
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September 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
@60 oh my god you need to update soon!! Loving this story!
DB
DB
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September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i don't know if you're aware you're doing this, but you've been calling Harry 'EVANS' his pseudonym is Evan Harris, therefore when Severus is using his first name, it shouldn't have the S on the end.. It sounds like he's referring to him by his surname when you use 'Evans' as opposed to just "Evan"
On another note, i'm glad you've adopted this story, because i was really enjoying it. Looking forward to seeing where you take it. :)
On another note, i'm glad you've adopted this story, because i was really enjoying it. Looking forward to seeing where you take it. :)
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September 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sorry but this is the best spellcheck error ever....EVER!!!
Looking down at the massive letter, Remus was silent, brow furrowed. Then, quickly, he folded it up and stuffed it into a waiting Penelope.
hahahaahahahahahaahahahahaha
if you put together the MASSIVE letter being stuffed into Penelope...it is actually the best Freudian spellcheck error ever
Looking down at the massive letter, Remus was silent, brow furrowed. Then, quickly, he folded it up and stuffed it into a waiting Penelope.
hahahaahahahahahaahahahahaha
if you put together the MASSIVE letter being stuffed into Penelope...it is actually the best Freudian spellcheck error ever
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September 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I read for a good part of the day and am up to chap 51. Time for bed but just wanted to again compliment you on some absolutely brilliant writing. Really looking forward to seeing Wormtail get it. Also hoping that Remus ends up with Harry and Sirius as well but not sure if that will happen. Also waiting to see Dumbledore's reaction to Bill's answer, that is not going to be pretty at all.
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September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I understand that a good portion of the earlier chapters are not yours, but the constant DAA instead of the correct DDA is truly annoying.
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September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far, you are carrying the story on perfectly.
One note, you use the word "vaulted" as in Lucius' vaulted connections in the ministry. You used it several times in the same way. I think the word you meant to use should be "vaunted". Minor mistake though, and not something that breaks the flow of the story.
I think my favourite part of the story is the increasingly friendly relationship between Harry and Draco. I am really hoping for a future scene of the two of them getting drunk together. I don't know why but I can only imagine it as incredibly funny.
I am not sure how much I trust Bellatrix once she wakes up. I can't imagine she is going to take Harry's position well.
Really well done on keeping the story going. If someone didn't know that two authors had written this, that you had taken up where another author had left off, they would say that this was written by one person. It is incredibly difficult to take over someone else's story and not lose the feel and flavour of the story. You have succeeded in this, without a doubt.
One note, you use the word "vaulted" as in Lucius' vaulted connections in the ministry. You used it several times in the same way. I think the word you meant to use should be "vaunted". Minor mistake though, and not something that breaks the flow of the story.
I think my favourite part of the story is the increasingly friendly relationship between Harry and Draco. I am really hoping for a future scene of the two of them getting drunk together. I don't know why but I can only imagine it as incredibly funny.
I am not sure how much I trust Bellatrix once she wakes up. I can't imagine she is going to take Harry's position well.
Really well done on keeping the story going. If someone didn't know that two authors had written this, that you had taken up where another author had left off, they would say that this was written by one person. It is incredibly difficult to take over someone else's story and not lose the feel and flavour of the story. You have succeeded in this, without a doubt.