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person Nae
schedule September 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I read hp and the decent into darkness ages ago and was highly disappointed when the author gave it up. Now its been adopted and im finding that its just as good as the original which is unusual. Usally adopted fics fail miserably. This just proves danyealles skill.
Please don't stop, i doubt we'll be lucky enough to get a third great author if you do.
person Chii-pet
schedule August 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
An update!!! *squeals loudly* I'm so excited to see what happens to Dumbledore when Harry and Tom get married! And the blowout when he tries to force Harry to stay with the Weasleys! Gah, update soon!
schedule August 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 65=64.

Thank the merciful Gods and Muses! And you, dear author.

Good chapter. A steady trickle of events. Hehehehehe, Elder Wand! Now that's a good piece of news.
person Mira
schedule August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm you over use the word plenty ,apart from that it was great
person autumngold
schedule August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your new, excellent update! I am so glad that Tom is now going to know where the elder wand is. Hopefully, between he and Harry, they will be able to get the last hollow. Dumbledore is a real piece of work. Hopefully magic will punish him for all of his manipulations and lies. The visions Dumbledore sends him are the worst, I hope he pays if he tries that again. Fabulous new chapter! Can't wait to see how Nick and Harry's holiday plans work!
person starr
schedule August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You updated !!!! you made my day ...Finally Harry saw the wand !!!!! now he has to see how to get it....will he have to fight to get it ???? really feel for Harry with all the kids in school asking all the dumb ? to bad he just can't blast everyone to hell...I want to thank you for the update again !!!!!!!!!! I love this story, so good.
person Jen
schedule August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yeah new chapter love it keep it up.
person Runriran
schedule August 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, i hope Hermione, Luna and the Weasleys will come to Harry side.
I likes to read their interaction, even if they didn't stand for the Dark Lord's cause i think it will be more interesting if they stand for Harrys' though.
Keep up the good work and i'm sorry for (maybe, i don't know though) my bad grammar :D
person Lia
schedule August 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
52. Chapter 51

I know you already have other chapters written and possibly this will not help but want to say.

Do not sit well with me that Sirius call Tom to Voldemort. I understand that in this chapter Harry still disoriented and possibly not notice ..
Also this echo that Sirius does not like Voldemort, barely tolerated by love Harry. So to me it makes no sense to call him Tom, besides that I do not think Voldemort never gave permission for such a thing because (as I understand) only associate it with something good with Harry, otherwise I think I would remind the fact he hates his Muggle father.

And I think it may be that you have overlooked that Tom is almost always transformation Snake Face Voldemort because they can see the other Death Eaters do not know that Voldemort has human form.

PS: Sorry if something is not understood, the English is not my native language.
person juy
schedule August 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
your amazing work! I really love your story, and also you ;)