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That broke my heart :(

I think it will bring them together because you wouldn't do that to us after all this time! Haha. Love it as always. So sad for Harry :( He's already suffered so much. I hope he is able to connect with Severus sooner than later and accept the comfort that his lover is surely aching to offer. Thanks for updating so quickly! <3

Poor Harry and Severus. Usually when there is a miscarriage the chances for another pregnancy being miscarried rises. I can't believe you did that!!! You're soooo mean. Meany Butt!!! But I know for things to get better sometimes things need to get worse. I hope this doesn't break them up. I hope Harry doesn't blame Snape for this. Update again soon please.

Oh harsh!! Moldie Voldie!! Couldn't leave well enough alone and let Harry and Sev have some peace hmm? Bring him back to kill him again!
Okay, now that that's out of my system, another good chapter, hope Sev understands Harry needs a moment to pull himself together, and I really hope it doesn't tear them apart. I await the next!

Leania

You have them all done? Wow you are awesome. I will jump up and down or crawl on my belly through hot coals and broken glass if you will update again soon. I'll make cutey faces or meany faces if it'll help. But I know you won't kill off Harry. I hope... But I will try to wait patiently for the next update. Try...

omggggggggggg. getting good now lol. kinda scary though o_o hope you update soon!

Ah I thought it might be that, but I was going for the high drama, less expected ideas. I'm guessing there's going to be a few close calls, magic draining situations where Harry's life will be in jepardy? Can't wait to read more ^.^

Leania

Poor Snape... I agree with Harry but he's going to have a rough time of it being afraid for Harry the whole time.

just read the last two chapters and not an unexpected twist, but kind of curious as to how after one day away and harry feeling sorry for himself with no other (mentioned) obvious symptoms this prompted sev and dumbles to check for pregnancy and why immediately, why not stay at the beach for however long they had originally planned, the fact that they each packed a suitcase alluding to an extended stay versus just an overnight bag. just feels kind of rushed. hope you explain things better in the next chapter because up til now it's been a great story, feeling very well thought out, this last bit seems kind of like you just tacked it on as an afterthought

yeah, i'm thinking har won't be carrying to term.... i mean, maybe if he were in optimum health he'd have a chance but har isn't. n I can't see har ending the life of his child so easily though. it's in his nature to fight for it.
As far as abortion goes, i think medical danger to the parent is the only good reason for it. Even so, it's a decision that's going to cost them either way.