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poor harry :( loved it

What made Snape think Harry would get better after her left??? Okay so they had a rocky mess but c'mon. Men are so dumb. He wasn't gonna get better without Severus. Hope Harry is okay and that Snape gets the scare of his life before he decides to leave Harry again. Hope more is to come soon please.

yeah, not sure why they did that. the 'improvements' seem to have caused the 'block of text' syndrome right, left and central. at least you got a handle on it.
sigh, snape, better and stronger for it, my arse. he should know that har is emotionally vulnerable, that if the one person who said they wanted him suddenly didn't anymore, har would likely just give up. He should KNOW that! Seriously, who did he think was going to check on har? he's the only one who knows about the potions etc. All i can say is that it's obvious sev wasn't thinking very clearly either.
sadly, even at rock bottom... there's always a way to find a new rock bottom. I hope they can head up from here though, since i doubt har would survive a trip further down.

okay, i was enjoying the fic until it reached chap 35, then it felt like my eyeballs hit a wall of words and crushed them under their collective mass. other then that, you are an update god, and your story is good.

depressing :( update soon!

There is a big spacing issue with this last chapter. In the sense that their are no spaces at all. As far as the story goes i think enough shitty things have happened to Harry and Sev.

That was sad. I feel sorry for the both of them, but I hope you make things okay for the both of them soon. SOON!!!

Also I agree with RecordKeeper. For some reason all the fics I read have NO spacing at all...I wonder WTF is going on?...Oh well.

Hi, it's lancelot. It seems to be a problem with the site not the story. All the other chapters that were fine, look the same. Right now there is nothing I can do, unfortunately. Green

wow... this is a great story! I really like it - personally I've never been a fan of erotica that was only sex; I need solid writing to go with it, some depth, you know? And well, this definitely has it. Lol I was thinking half jokingly "Oh, yeah he's pregnant", when the huge push for him to go back to the hospital came, and I cracked up when it turned out to be true It's sad how it came out, though.

This is one of those "could have happened" situations; man did I feel bad for Snape at the end of the Harry Potter books, and that whole ten minutes of flashback with him near the end of "Deathly Hallows Part II" I thought was the best part (it really tore me up when Snape looked so tortured and said "but it's her SON!")

Regardless, I am really looking forward to reading more of this story; it's the reason I finally registered for the site.

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