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by IsysSkeeter

schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like the story please keep updating
person Talltree-san
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So it was the twins and Alphard that started the cult. I wonder what they're hoping to accomplish with that. I'm still really curious about that night when Harry and Ron were attacked and why Harry didn't die from the poison and what said poison did to him instead.
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, salazar really isn't good at the whole loving parent thing. All showing affection to Har will do is make Tom jealous wow, sev as har's godfather... i could actually see that and i think the two would mesh well, especially with this har;s snakey slyth side.
person Raven
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hello.... Last names from America. Meyer, Meyers, Lynch, Hamilton, Hilton, Mezeles, Houston, Rodgers, Gibbs, Hancock, Donaldson
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
fortunately, she's stopped now. but it was damn desturbing while it was going on. there are somethings i just DONT need to know about my parents. 0_o'

glad we got a bit of back story on the kids this time out...
i feel for tom, seriously, all he wants is to please his sire and he gets cold shoulder while har gets smiles. envy and jelousy is a horrible start to a relationship but i'm getting the feeling it's the start of Har and toms.
maybe har's inner snake is drawing the old vamp.

well, we already know har is sly and keeps himself hidden. those are two characteristics. will he get any physical traits like vision or scent enhancment? Was the snake that bit him magical, cause if it was it may have passed stuff onto him. like venom immunity... at least to the venom of it's kind. I don't think he'll get a change form out of it unless something triggers his dormant, now altered, genes.

was the red eyed man a fang? if so it might explain the old lords attraction to har. dormant vampire blood or something and he can sense har's hidden nature/ potential.
schedule January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, damn, i hope voldi doesn't think himself tossed ova for har. that would definately bode bad things.
about the kids though, i meant how did they come about. m preg, adoption, surrogate, what, surely theres a bit of back story there. whether we get to hear it or not is a different matter. :p.
saddly, i've also had to put up with involuntary audio voyerisum with my mother. I used to bang on the wall when they kept me awake... and resorted to ear plugs. I envy har his ability to adjust to it.
person Talltree-san
schedule January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow it's getting even stranger. Why the heck is Sirius giving Harry dark books? Seems like Harry's starting a little cult or something it's kinda scary and yet it's also really interesting. It also seems like Harry is slowly but surely corrupting and tainting all his friends...that cute little devil ^-^!
person Drackensroost
schedule January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
As an idea for Harry's power, have it develop a bit until he can see past glamours.
person Talltree-san
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*Giggles* drinks on me indeed lol! I guess maybe the vision of Slytherin being so old looking is just that a vision. I mean he is a vampire usually they're young looking, but what do I know maybe he has aged a bit physically.
person Talltree-san
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Man all that talk of tomatoes got me hankering for some grilled cheese! Also would a silencing spell kill Harry's parents, I mean I would be scared for life if my parents did THAT. Cause back at my parent's house my room was RIGHT NEXT TO THEIRS so thank God they didn't, but Harry seems to take it in stride though XD LOL!