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November 1, 2019 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!!!
This story is amazing!!!!!!!
Write more soon please!!!!!!!!!
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March 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Can't wait for more.
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January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow .. hope your still writing this story. Seems like a good one.
Will you please let me know if you do update on e-mail oogies4u@gmail.com
DragZ
Will you please let me know if you do update on e-mail oogies4u@gmail.com
DragZ
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February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey hun, great plot line. I can only think of one way you could possibly make the story even better. Getting a beta to look over the finished chapters. Probably would be best if you finished your fabulous plot so they don't cut out any wonderful plot points or clever play on words, Whist still helping to catch those pesky typos and the odd spelling and or grammar mistake.
Keep up the good work!
I hope you update soon because your story is intriguing.
So please update soon!
Luce
Keep up the good work!
I hope you update soon because your story is intriguing.
So please update soon!
Luce
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February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow its brillant
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December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pls plz!!! Update!! I'm dying to know what will happen nxt!!! This story is one bloody brilliant...plz update soon?
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June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. i am looking forward to more.
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
once again, the Engrish made it extremely hard to wring sense from this. I want to enjoy the story but its like reading bad subtitles. I have to sort of guess at the meaning. I'm sure it wasn't this bad at the start.
Please PLEASE get a bata...
Who or what is Oaks and why have we not heard of it previously.
Please PLEASE get a bata...
Who or what is Oaks and why have we not heard of it previously.
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May 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i had to read this twice to get the gist of it. please, please, watch your spelling and tenses. the story is good but the spelling and the switching around of tenses when people speak makes it confusing. perhaps if you speak it aloud to yourself or something when you type it to see if it flows right and makes sense? this is unbated yes?
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May 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay an eagerly awaited update! It was great, I can't wait to see what Yukisan's part will be. Great job, can't wait to read more!