rate_review Reviews

Your story is great so far. I hope you finish it and post it.

i'm loving this. hide and seek. too fantastic. Has me giddy alongside Hermione lol

Fun little story so far, one typo at the beginning of chapter 2, I believe you meant interest, I'm on a cell phone or I would copy and paste the paragraph for you, keep up the good work, it has a lot of potential.

Me again,

"I don't know why you have this sudden intreats in me Malfoy but I can guarantee that I will not be participating in this little game you're playing." She looked straight up at him.

Just so you don't have to look through the whole chapter. I really am enjoying this, I can;t wait to see where you take it!

Cheers...again.
Magzie

Very nice so far. I like that Hermione isn't giving in completely or a complete puddle on the floor (yet anyway). I like where this is going and your style fits the characters perfectly. Can't wait to read more. :)

I can't wait to read more! :)