rate_review Reviews

Awesome story, you portray the characters really well and your writing style really flows so smoothly that I have trouble stopping reading... I can't WAIT to read more of it, the ritual, how Voldemort will change etc... I'm really excited... keep up the good work

I love your sequel, and I loved your original story! Your writing skills are very impressive to me, and I'm really enjoying your story! I hope you update it soon and I am very much looking forward to reading more!

I loved your first story and the sequel is turning out to be just as great! I like the plot differences between your story and J.K. Rowlings'. Definitely wasn't expecting acromantulas, but it's a great idea to punish Ron instead of dragons. Thanks for the new chapter!

Hello! First off, I want to tell you you're doing a terrific job with this story so far! I only have a few questions that have yet to be answered.
1. What is the meaning of the black flames?
2. When Voldemort and Marvolo combine, will he attempt to do something to Harry that will be unwilling due to the mix of insane/sane? I mean...at first, since they mindsets won't be completely the same...?
and 3. When will I get to see some hot and sexy action going on?

I'm looking forward to your next chapter!

P.S. While I was reading your story, I totally envisioned Voldie pinning Harry to a cemetary statue(totally lost the real word at the moment) and kissing the life out of him for the first time with a corpial body.

Omg thats all you have. God please continue, i've been so enjoying this series you've put together. I love Sirius and Snape's personalities and I love how you've put to light all the things i used to question about dumbles decision making skills! Please please continue. I read this over the span of athree days and I hate it stopped here! keep it up. you've given brand new insight into the magical world and made it something complete new and interesting. I really really hope u continue

FAN!~

You are a genius for you storys. They are spectacular! Cannot wait for it to continue

I hardly ever reveiw stories, so this feels a tad awkward, but I really like your story and can't wait for the next chapter.
I aslo have to say wonderful choice for the first task. I know this was probably explained in a past chapter, but can Ron drop out as honorary champion, or because he agreed to take part in this as his punishment, does he have to go through with it? Not that I want Ron to do so since he deserves to be put in his place...

I absolutely looove this story. You my dear, had incorporated all the aspects I love to read in stories, drama, bashing, showing how Harry became powerful and it is not like a overnight thing, one minute he is useless next BAM he is powerful no u didn't do that. I am also very much excited in the slash that is going to happen i am basically on the edge i am so excited for the next chapter. Just to let you know in chapter 9 towards the last paragrah you wrote

um...i realize that you probably have a life off of the computer, but the edited thingy at the bottom of the summary said that you started this at the beginning of january, but then stopped at the end...i was wondering if the story was abandoned? it is really good. i like how you invented marvolo. there are so many things that you did that no one else that i read did that made this story awesome. i really hope that this isnt abandoned with how good everything is getting. please update?