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I am SOOOOOOO glad that you posted again. I read your first story and then this one. I really am impressed with how you are writing and the story you've created. I'm looking forward to future posts from you. Take your time and don't rush it, promise that we'll still be here next time you post ;-)

I've been enjoying this so much and I look forward to the next update. Did you realized that chapter 12 and 13 are the same?

Very good chapter! Can't wait for an update!

You posted the Acromantula chapter twice btw.

you've uploaded chapter 12 first task :Acromantulas twice.

... love the story, but did you know that ch. 13 is a copy of ch. 12.....

first of all, let me say welcome back and kudos for being able to get yourself together enough to continue on. thats no easy thing to do when RL decides to drop you a random arse kicking. i really was worried that this one had been abandoned and that would have been a damn shame. it's one of my top three fav har goes to voldi fics along with weapon and descent into darkness.

now, onto the chappie.
poor har, he's struggling to learn control and then his teenage hormones kick in. i'm glad marvey cares enough about him not to just take him up on it, but to make sure he knows what is needed and what he is truly offering with these gestures. once har understands, his submission will be one of the greatest gifts LV has ever received. i just hope LV doesn't take har for granted. i hope marvey will help har go through the book and discuss the ideas and concepts within helping him adjust.

blinks... well, har made a dawdle of the first task huh. lol, no acromantula were permanently hurt in the performing of this first task... not by har anyway. nice one in depetrifying that baby. aragog will remember har as being both powerful AND merciful. thats sure to come in useful later.

tch, if dumbles wasn't at least a bit suspicious after that, there'd be something serious,y wrong with his head.
nice to ickle ronnikins finally starting to get the point. *sneers in his direction.

This story (and the one that preceded it) is so much fun to read, and I can tell that you've had a lot of fun writing it. The way you've written it flows so well that it immediately draws a reader in, and I absolutely loved your portrayal of Voldemort in the last chapter. I also think your Severus Snape is one for whom I can really root, and I can't wait to read more!

I hope you haven't forgotten about this story. Cuz, this is the second time I've read it, and it's still just as good as last time.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!! This is a wonderful story- so UPDATE~

Please update the story... the plot is very good and I am dying to know what will happen next