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I love how you're writing Sirius. 12 years in prison for a crime that you didn't commit would definitely leave a mark and I'm glad that you're showing that.

I expected Severus to demand more about Harry's knowledge re: Voldemort. Yes, he's trusted Harry up to his point but nothing has been as serious or highly dangerous as the prospect of joining Voldemort.

Great chapter.

I hope your grandmother I well soon, I don't mind not etting a response, just knowing you read my comment is enough! :D x another amazing chapter, so brilliant keep up the "marvolous" work! Hehe :D

So, 'sub' Har is going to be subtley doming from the bottom? Good! I haven't read many of the ones where Har is wussy and weak, but those i did made me cringe. Seriously, Har would have to be completely broken before that came about and then, he wouldn't really be Har anymore, would he.
I'm glad siri's on the mend... though I'm a bit worried about those mood alter potions. If he needs them to stay stable, teaching is going to be most difficult.
If Siri teaches, it'll be interesting to see how else this differs from the book. Will he get his name in the goblet? If he does i bet dumbles will be directly responsible some how. will he willingly go and contribute to the dark lords rising (i've read one other where he does and it was epic... though saddly unfinished.) How will he cope once Marvy is melded with the original. What of the other Horcruxes....
Oh, soooooooo many possibilites to play with. ^^
I'm glad at how well Sev took the news of Har's plans. He might not agree, but he's willing to trust for the time being. It'll be interesting to see how the Malfoy's play into this as well.

I just finished reading the 1st installment of ISotD, and I have to tell you its one of the most interesting fics I've read in quite awhile. I really enjoy the time and detail you put into developing the characters, and I think they do a wonderful job. Your Snape is VERY good, believable and unique at the same time. I am greatly looking forward to reading this next installment! Thanks, and keep up the great work!

Nice beginning for the sequel. I think the loyalty was changed when Severus found out that Marvolo did try to spare Lily during that attack. Should make things interesting.

I LOVE this story, however there is only ONE element im really worried about....will Draco and harry become friends? :( I know he's a prat right now and stuff, but I like when they're friends a lot, and am unsure about stories that he just like dies or is hated 24/7 and "gets whats coming to him" etc.
:)
love the story tho!
Betsey

Well I think this one will be as successful as your first one...the fourth year promises to be interesting for Harry...can't wait to read more

Adore this so far, the last one was great and this one is starting out to be just as great. It has me constantly checking for updates hehe. Keep up the good work. Cant wait for the rest :)

Thankies :)

Great start for this part of the story. Marvolo having nightmares thanks to Voldie was fantastic and the difference between the two of them is wonderfully written.
I'm a little bit concerned about the warnings and hints of heavy BDSM dynamics, not the BDSM per se for we all know Voldie is a little control freak not to mention the psycopathic mass murder that is NOT exactly speaking of 'cute puppy here'. But when Voldie and Marvolo will reunite, the Dark Lord will have two horcrux loving Harry inside, it's almost 1/3 of his soul and it SHOULD have a big influence on his character. Furthermore, even as Voldie-all-bad-guy, he choosed Harry as his equal according to the prophecy and I think it's kind of difficoult to have an heavy BDSM relationship with someone you choose as your equal.

first off, let me say, i'm sorry about your mum. secondly, will voldi the original need his other horcurxes on hand to bring him back to virtual sanity? cause from that flash, he's pretty much nutteres atm.
Damn, dumbles got off the hook far to easily... i was kind of hoping remi would fade back into the wood work so he couldn't discrace himself any further.