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mmm... Severus with a double edged long sword makes me salivating too :))) Anyway... it's really good to see Harry so joyful and happy, as any boy should be and it's soooo sweet to see Marvolo agreeing to anything to make him smile.
For the unpleasent things: how much do I hate Ron (well, not that I love Hermione)?? Very, very, very much, and not only in your story. I understand the 'first boy Harry becomes friend with' thing, but I think he's really just an obtuse, jealous, ignorant person. There arent's many stories where I like him and usually in those he's OOC.

hey. Just wanted to pop in and say I like your story, and I like where you are running with it. I also liked the weaponry section in this last chapter. I cringed when Severus told Harry to do a hundred of each of the eight swings. You also captured the 'feel' of a first time clash perfectly. Great work!


p.s. I am a fan of scimitars and bows, myself. Especially a recurve bow with an offset handle system to compensate for being a girl.

I am grateful that you are continuing the story and understand. Have a problem must Harry loose the ability? What about him as a animagus in some winged snake form, a form that is both dark and light-like his wand? This would show his power and help him talk to Voldemort with out others knowing.

That was a perfect balance of what a person would expect from a dark lord...not a crazy dimented dark wizard...very good chapter

Lol, with Siri the phrase 'just cause your paranoid it doesn't mean they aren't out to get you' really applies huh. ^^
So, no exposure to 'moody' this year. awww, booo. this miss out on 'CONSTANT VIGILANCE!' *fake pouts.
I think it's a really good idea to have Har learn weapons. I always thougt wizards were a bit to reliant on their wands. A knife in the right place can be just as effective. as for practice, it wouldn't surprise me that Sev would be skilled. nothing beats practice against a live appoinent.

Really good chapter. I loved it. I can't wait for more.

xoxo,
kitkat

This is one of the rare stories that has me checking every couple of hours for an update.



So please give me an update!

Hello! I just wanted to say that I really like your story. It kept me from my syllabus' for two days in exam period, an that's saying something^^, I just couldn't stop reading =p !
I want to congratulate you because your story has an plot, and it's not something that you easily find on this website. You managed to make people interested in you story with something that is not only about sex.
I like the way you portrayed the dark arts, it's quite refreshing, and I love the sprites, there are so cute.

Your characters are also very well constructed, Harry luckily has kept his own will, Marvolo well he is Marvolo, Snape is interesting and Sirius is very well done to. I find him more realistic than J.K.Rowling's (I've always thought he should have been more traumatized after 12 years of Askaban)

If you're interested in my opinion about putting Snape and Sirius together, I think it would be interesting, but please do it progressively. It would be ridiculous as you so rightly said, that they both wake up one morning look at each other and both fall in love, with the "I'm gay" factor on top of it.

As for the meeting Marvolo/Snape I'm not at all disappointed, so don't worry there^^. And even if you receive criticism, it's your story and you write what you want.

I'm very curious about Hermione, I'm wondering on which side you'll place her.

Can't wait to read the rest! Continue like that, it's one of my favorite stories.

As for your family member with cancer, I really hope she makes it, I hope you have all the comfort you need.

PS: I hope I've not made to many mistakes, as English is't my first language.

XXX

You're are a wonderful writer. This last chapter was everything and nothing of what I was expecting. Een if its a little bit cruel I really liked the part where you made Severus bow to the Dark Lord, it showed (At least to me) that even if Severus is stil a little bit doubtful he still needed the Dark Lord to remind himself of his true alliance. Keep on with the good work, you're truly awesome.

okay, i'm a happy little person right now. Not only is this continuing nicely (Yay! Sevvies on board! oh, i hope they don't burn Har out trying to get him ready in time.) but the one i mentioned in my earlier review, my fave unfinished of a similar theme? Someone i've immense talent has picked it up and will be continuing it. *sighs blissfully. And the original Author posted the pre quil again. Similar idea, different spin.
I'm surronded by happily dark Har's with Voldi horcruxs of awesome riding shotty and epicly dark lordish voldie's pairing with him. Life is good.