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Brilliant! Plans already made and First Task coming... :D

Finally! We meet the real Voldemort! Hurrraaaay! :D

You story has gripped me so effectively that I check for updates every single day. I apologise for not commenting earlier, and I hope not to miss a single comment in the future.

It is quite an original plot you have hear. Your style is not bad at all, not at all bad, which makes the story so much oleasurable to read.

I really can't wait to see some HP/LV action. And I am curious about Voldemort after merging; I hope he won't become sappy, but his usual self with a sane mind :D

Wish you all the ideas you need for the next chapter and more!

actually choosing Acromantulas was innovative of you, and your right about the dragons. No one else ever usually changes the first tasks out

Here I am again. Had very little time the last week so I've read the last chapters all together today.
Poor, poor house-elves, I really pity them: two weeks with Hermione in crusade mode is a living hell! Really, the girl ought to be the brightest witch of her age, but sometimes it seems she prefere to listen to her own voice that what the others might have to say.
Well, it seems the great moment has arrived: the meeting!! I like Marvolo's magic new sensation: spicy...mmmm. I'm looking forward to know what kind of sensation Harry'll have from LV's own magic.
Oh, and I really, really appreciated Marvolo's instructions about the 'not belong to him yet', even for Severus. Hope to read more soon.

arrrrgh. what a place to leave it.
snickers, i can't wait for ronnikins to get his kiester kicked and as for mio, good grief, you'll have to pound that point home with a mallet to get it thru her dogma d up head.

hmmm, i could envisage both responses but really, i reckon she'd do both. u know, blaze up with the 'oh, my pooooor child, how could this happen' then settle into the 'oh we're soooooo proud of you Ron. such a great opportunity... blah blah blah' sadly both responses are likely to further the exposure of his inner oik. the first by making him even more resentful and the second by selling his head.

Ah mini-cliff hanger how dare you? Wonderful chapter I look forward to you next update and your response to how Molly would react is spot on with the personality that I see being portrayed in this fic and in my opinion with the way Ron has been acting I believe that the second option would be better and not knowing how you want to portray the Weasley family I would also think that she would yell at Sirius and Harry for putting her baby in danger after Ron faces the dragon just a thought. Great chapter I love your story! Please update soon.

Thanks for the new update! I can't wait to see their meeting with the current Lord Voldemort - his impression of Harry should be interesting.

Ron's punishment is a tad unbelievable. (Consider, for instance, the amount of money it would take to aquire another dragon at the last minute, pay for its transportation and upkeep, take on additional dragon handlers, etc. Not to mention, drawing international attention to one young boy's misbehavior seems a bit... weird.) His /reaction/ to his punishment, however, is. I think you've done a good job painting Ron in a negative light without, as you say, making him evil. He's a teenager - they do stupid things and handle uncomfortable situations with immaturity. It's what they do.

So who was the one following Sirius? I thought it would be another Barty Crouch - maybe waiting to ambush Sirius like the canon character did to Moody before impersonating him. Is the follower still there, or was it the "snake assassin"?

Definitely do a Mama Weasley scene, what fun! But I'd do it after the first task so she can pitch her fit in ALL directions! Our esteemed Headmaster should definitely receive the benefit of Molly's motherly care - both barrels.

I'm really enjoying these fics, and your characters and plot ideas are truly entertaining. Kudos to you!

I think I missed it..how did Ron get that status?

Don't worry about writing about the Weasleys... you can just move the plot right along lol. I'm tired of Ron haha
Good chapter! Excited that they're meeting the older Voldemort finally!