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for The Underling

by AlphazSlut

schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved that Draco kept denying that he was romantically interested in Harry. Now of course, he will see that he is. I liked the idea that Draco and Lucius are investing how Harry came to be with them.
person yamiik
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ok this is a good chapter cant wait to see how dinner is going to go
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Thank you for telling me you updated! My only peeve for this site is that there is no alert system. And you deserve my compliments it was beautiful! I can't wait to see why harry is there! Probably a version of the dursleys fault. Thanks for posting I can not wait for more!
person Sjerda
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is still a great story and I'll wait for the next chapter!
I want to know why Harry was made an Underling (even if it's part of some great plan, they had to give an explanation as to what's wrong with him, right?)...
Till the next chapter!
person addiena saffir
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh so many possibilities for this story! So many ways you could take this *fangirl drool* i can't wait to see which way you choose.
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is extremely good! I cant wait to see why Harry is an Underling & I cant wait to see what happens next! Please update as soon as you can! This fic is just so good!
person Usagi
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh, please continue! Beautifully written btw. I just wish the chaps were a bit longer.
person Talltree-san
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Draco I think your green-eyed monster is showing XD lol!
person Sjerda
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I hope you'll update soon!
Bye
Sjerda
person angelmuziq
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it! So please whip up another chapter as soon as you can. I love it when Harry surprises people. I hope he is rather smart and powerful. And I hope Draco wont be too much of a brat. LOL. And I personally like Harrison and Draconis- seems so proper. LOL. I cant wait for Draco to find out that Harry isnt disfigured...he isnt right? 8o except if he had the lightning bolt scar on his face, thats ok. Anyway keep up the great work. I didnt see any mistakes and I love the plotline. Update as soon as you can!